Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

So Samantha saw James and Charles drop off the dead body. Now, she will also find her phone and discover Marian is in danger and that Drake was murdered. I am positive that Jasmine is in that house. Great writing.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2021

That phone is lost in my writing corridor at the moment. I see it in two different ways and am wondering which way to go. time will tell I guess.

Thanks for the review and of course your kindness.
Always, Carol;

Comment from Judy Lawless

Excellent

Oh, oh. I'm worried that Samantha doesn't have her phone! Someone else has intercepted Marian's message, I fear. Just when the pieces were starting to fall into place, we're hanging on another snag again. Great job, Carol.

"Gotta any better ones?" - either Got any better ones?, or Got a better one?

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021

Suggestions fixed.

As always, I am grateful for your review and for knowing you continue to enjoy what I write.

Hugs, Carol

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Oh so that's why Sam didn't pick up her phone! FBI agents can't drop their phones! Lol. Ah, you mixing work with food pleasure again. I hope they can get to Marian on time. Sounds like a climactic encounter soon!

Comment:
"We're you spying on me?" (Were) autocorrect causing troubles?

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021

Thanks as always, Helen.

I appreciate your time and review, and most of all, you!

Hugs, Carol

Comment from Jasmine Girl

Excellent

Two lunches at hearty American restaurants with burgers, pies, ice cream, bacon and eggs. Yummy. I'm hungry. It looks like they are making progress but I don't know what happened to Samantha's phone. I bet someone has stolen it.

Well done.

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021

I hope they soon discover that the men are involved in bboTH crimes and they can join forces (BEFORE SOMETHING ELSE HAPPENS)?THANK YOU SO MUCH.

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

Hank and Emmy are such a committed couple. These ones are soon going to zero in on the beach murders, and will start to put two and two together. Meanwhile hoping for safety for Jaz and for Tiffany. Another chapter full of interest and intrigue.
Wendy

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021

Thank you as always for the kind review and for your time in reading and enjoying. As always, I greatly appreciate it.

Hugs, Carol

Comment from Elizabeth Emerald

Excellent

Block-buster! Vivid and intense--great dialog!

Now I think I see how this is converging--Sam and Marian are partners in the porn sting--but don't realize it's a cover for the underlying murder scheme?


"That's okay. Most people get nervous around this brut=>BRUTE.



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 Comment Written 21-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021

Thank you as always for the kind review and for your time in reading and enjoying. As always, I greatly appreciate it.

Hugs, Carol

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Poppa and Tango meet Candy who shares some relevant and important information with them concerning the case they are working in. Meanwhile some photos in the possession of Samantha, including important ones on a beach, Sam wants to share with Garth. Great episode Carol, blessings Roy
Typo : Around this brut(e.), Poppa.

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 Comment Written 21-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021

Thank you as always for the kind review and for your time in reading and enjoying. As always, I greatly appreciate it.

Hugs, Carol

reply by royowen on 22-Nov-2021

Well done

Comment from lancellot

Exceptional

Good chapter. They seem to gathering information and moving closer. I saw two little things to look at but the rest seems perfect.

notes:


"Wow, {how d'you} know that?" Her eyes darted around the picnic area. "{We're }you spying on me?"

Hank laughed, "I bet you she doesn't make it without spilling something."

Hank Laughed. "I bet..

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021

Fixed!

Thank you as always for the kind review and for your time in reading and enjoying. As always, I greatly appreciate it.

Hugs, Carol