Revenge
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Comment from LJbutterfly
How did you ever think of adding the secret passages? This is so compelling I can't seem to read fast enough. I like to guess what I think is going to happen next, but there's no time. Gripping action constantly takes place, with no way out. Magnificent!
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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How did you ever think of adding the secret passages? This is so compelling I can't seem to read fast enough. I like to guess what I think is going to happen next, but there's no time. Gripping action constantly takes place, with no way out. Magnificent!
Comment Written 21-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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You are so kind, Lorraine and I thank you so much. Writing this story has been my salvation and I am thrilled I still write and others enjoy it.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
Wow, what a chapter. Thank heavens for a secret room. Marian shows herself to be very quick-witted despite the persona of dementia she shows to James. Very well written!
Wendy
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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Wow, what a chapter. Thank heavens for a secret room. Marian shows herself to be very quick-witted despite the persona of dementia she shows to James. Very well written!
Wendy
Comment Written 21-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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Thank you as always for the kind review and for your time in reading and enjoying. As always, I greatly appreciate it.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
Another action packed adventure in the land of Carol. Making us wonder just what-the-heck happened or if the rifle to the head made for all the blood. LOL. Thanks for sharing another fine chapter. Hope all is well, or better, in your world!
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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Another action packed adventure in the land of Carol. Making us wonder just what-the-heck happened or if the rifle to the head made for all the blood. LOL. Thanks for sharing another fine chapter. Hope all is well, or better, in your world!
Comment Written 21-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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Thank you as always for the kind review and for your time in reading and enjoying. As always, I greatly appreciate it.
Hugs, Carol
Hope you are feeling better. My life has just moved forward to Drama Act 2 Scene 3
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was another excellent chapter, Carol. I'm glad Marian has the team to back her, it's just a shame that Sam wasn't able to answer her call. But at least she'll know what's going on soon and get the help Marian needs. This is all exciting stuff, my friend. I'll be away now for the next two weeks, I think I told you, but I wanted to read this part first. I won't get internet on the ship and Graham said he doesn't want me on holiday with my head in the laptop all the time. LOL. Take care, dear friend. Love and hugs. Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2021
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That was another excellent chapter, Carol. I'm glad Marian has the team to back her, it's just a shame that Sam wasn't able to answer her call. But at least she'll know what's going on soon and get the help Marian needs. This is all exciting stuff, my friend. I'll be away now for the next two weeks, I think I told you, but I wanted to read this part first. I won't get internet on the ship and Graham said he doesn't want me on holiday with my head in the laptop all the time. LOL. Take care, dear friend. Love and hugs. Sandra xxx
Comment Written 21-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2021
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Oh, are you going on a cruise...how absolutely outstanding. I feel blessed you took the time to read this chapter and will truly miss you because the story is just about to blow wide open. Enjoy, stay safe and know I am thinking of you. Thanks for the beautiful stars from a beautiful friend.
Love to you...Smiles and hugs, Carol
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I'll have a lovely lot of exciting chapters to read when I get back! Love you dear friend!! xxx
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Enjoy your time....Relax and dream up another book in your spare time! love ya, Carol
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I will!! Lova ya back! xxx
Comment from BethShelby
Great chapter. I don't know how the men who are looking for Tiffany and going to handle the fact they think there is no way for her to leave the area. Now Cheryl will be missing as well. I'm anxious to read you next chapter.
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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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Great chapter. I don't know how the men who are looking for Tiffany and going to handle the fact they think there is no way for her to leave the area. Now Cheryl will be missing as well. I'm anxious to read you next chapter.
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Comment Written 21-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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Thank you as always for the kind review and for your time in reading and enjoying. As always, I greatly appreciate it.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
A blockbuster! Amazed you can keep up the pace of churning these out--and you don't cut corners--each chapter is stunning and jam-packed. Now that we've known for several chapters that Marian is just pretending to demented, consider amending the description in the character list.
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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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A blockbuster! Amazed you can keep up the pace of churning these out--and you don't cut corners--each chapter is stunning and jam-packed. Now that we've known for several chapters that Marian is just pretending to demented, consider amending the description in the character list.
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Comment Written 21-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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Thank you as always for the kind review and for your time in reading and enjoying. As always, I greatly appreciate it.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Jasmine Girl
What a griping chapter! I enjoy reading it all the way through. You did a good job describing the action of Tiffany killing Drake during the shooting of the movie, escaping and getting rescued by the old actress Marian.
I agree Marian got herself into loads of trouble.
Exceptionally done.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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What a griping chapter! I enjoy reading it all the way through. You did a good job describing the action of Tiffany killing Drake during the shooting of the movie, escaping and getting rescued by the old actress Marian.
I agree Marian got herself into loads of trouble.
Exceptionally done.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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Maybe my brain was acknowledging something it wants to do to my family...just kidding of course.
Thank you as always for the kind review and for your time in reading and enjoying. As always, I greatly appreciate it.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Excellent job of writing this addition to your novel. I enjoyed reading. I am hoping Samantha gets to the girls in time. I am positive hunky Garth can help them. Good writing.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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Excellent job of writing this addition to your novel. I enjoyed reading. I am hoping Samantha gets to the girls in time. I am positive hunky Garth can help them. Good writing.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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Thank you as always for the kind review and for your time in reading and enjoying. As always, I greatly appreciate it. Garth is about to get slammed I think.
Hugs, Carol
