Revenge
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Comment from Judy Lawless
Well this is an interesting turn of events, and it's bringing us closer to the truth, I think. I hope Samantha knows what she's doing. She's dealing with some pretty dangerous men I think. Very well written, Carol.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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Well this is an interesting turn of events, and it's bringing us closer to the truth, I think. I hope Samantha knows what she's doing. She's dealing with some pretty dangerous men I think. Very well written, Carol.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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Thank you for reading and enjoying my story. It means so much to me. Sorry for the cut and paste. If I can ever get my head on straight it will be a miracle. Hugs, Carol
Comment from Carol Clark2
Glad to know more information about Samantha's past. I hope she doesn't do anything to James that's illegal or will get her in trouble. She needs to turn things over to Garth and Emmy. Hope the pictures help in both cases.
Good chapter! Blessings.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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Glad to know more information about Samantha's past. I hope she doesn't do anything to James that's illegal or will get her in trouble. She needs to turn things over to Garth and Emmy. Hope the pictures help in both cases.
Good chapter! Blessings.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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Thank you for reading and enjoying my story. It means so much to me. Sorry for the cut and paste. If I can ever get my head on straight it will be a miracle. Hugs, Carol
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Samantha has some heavy baggage and this is a very difficult time for her. You handled it with delicacy and real compassion. Good job. Now I'll be looking for 23
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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Samantha has some heavy baggage and this is a very difficult time for her. You handled it with delicacy and real compassion. Good job. Now I'll be looking for 23
Comment Written 15-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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Thank you for reading and enjoying my story. It means so much to me. Sorry for the cut and paste. If I can ever get my head on straight it will be a miracle. Hugs, Carol
Comment from Jasmine Girl
Samantha didn't recognize her sister from the burnt body. I think it is because she had plastic surgery. So it might still be her? Samantha is living on the edge, too if she is dealing with ex-con Vito.
Well done.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021
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Samantha didn't recognize her sister from the burnt body. I think it is because she had plastic surgery. So it might still be her? Samantha is living on the edge, too if she is dealing with ex-con Vito.
Well done.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021
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I think I have confused you....
the burnt body was a waitress (Angel) meant to make Allie believe her sister was killed - Allie works with Garth's team
Samantha is also FBI but on another team. Her sister took an overdose years ago when she thought her sister was dead
Vito (or imposter James) is involved with both deaths...
Vito went to prison (believing he'd left Samanath for dead)
he did not finger the Sheriff (then a wealthy playboy)
Samantha wants to avenge her sister and doesn't think clearly when it comes to Vito (James).
Hope that clears a few things up for you
Smiles, Carol
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Thanks a lot for explanation.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This story just gets better and better.
James recognized the incoming call and walked off the set, moving to the balcony. He closed the French doors and answered.
"Hello, my sweet. What a pleasure to hear from you." (comma after 'answered' and move the dialogue closer.)
"He can't be expected to drop what I was working on, can he?" ( can be written two ways - "He can't expect me to drop what I was working on, can he?" or "I can't be expected to drop what I was working on, can I?" I like the first best. )
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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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This story just gets better and better.
James recognized the incoming call and walked off the set, moving to the balcony. He closed the French doors and answered.
"Hello, my sweet. What a pleasure to hear from you." (comma after 'answered' and move the dialogue closer.)
"He can't be expected to drop what I was working on, can he?" ( can be written two ways - "He can't expect me to drop what I was working on, can he?" or "I can't be expected to drop what I was working on, can I?" I like the first best. )
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Comment Written 15-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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I hope I am doing this story justice, because you and so many who continue to follow deserve a good story. I thank you for your friendship and your reviews.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Bombshell revelation! How do you come up with these plots? Do you have the whole thing worked out before you write the story. I bow to the queen! Stunning chapter.
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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021
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Bombshell revelation! How do you come up with these plots? Do you have the whole thing worked out before you write the story. I bow to the queen! Stunning chapter.
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Comment Written 15-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021
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Thank you, Liz... In the beginning, I have a thought, and as it progresses, my thoughts expand to several chapters, and then it grows from there. I always know where I am headed in the end, but I am guessing how to get there as I move forward. Sometimes something new jumps into my mind while writing, and the whole story changes. I am just as surprised as the readers. LOL
Thanks so much... Always, Carol