Revenge
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Comment from Carol Clark2
Looks like you've found some time to write this weekend. I'm glad for you. I like that you've revealed more backstory here. Such a complicated plot! Blessings.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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Looks like you've found some time to write this weekend. I'm glad for you. I like that you've revealed more backstory here. Such a complicated plot! Blessings.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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I am flattered that you have continued to read and follow the story. So thrilled you are enjoying them. Thank you so much!
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
It's getting more complicated, but the twists and turns are also slowly revealing the background to understanding past events and what is driving them all. Good writing Carol - I don't know how you keep it all in your head!
Wendy
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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It's getting more complicated, but the twists and turns are also slowly revealing the background to understanding past events and what is driving them all. Good writing Carol - I don't know how you keep it all in your head!
Wendy
Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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I am flattered that you have continued to read and follow the story. So thrilled you are enjoying them. Thank you so much!
Hugs, Carol
Comment from royowen
It's really hard to work out why someone would sell their soul for fame or fortune, or possibly both. I like the way you understand the human psyche. How it works, and what it takes to be a villain, I personally know how it feels, but then you are perceptive and you've made your choices in life, and I'm glad, lots of people Benefit, beautifully written Carol, blessings Roy
Query : Marion or Marian?
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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It's really hard to work out why someone would sell their soul for fame or fortune, or possibly both. I like the way you understand the human psyche. How it works, and what it takes to be a villain, I personally know how it feels, but then you are perceptive and you've made your choices in life, and I'm glad, lots of people Benefit, beautifully written Carol, blessings Roy
Query : Marion or Marian?
Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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I hope I am doing this story justice, because you and so many who continue to follow deserve a good story. I thank you for your friendship and your reviews.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Patty Palmer
A great chapter again for sure! As the story goes on we find twists and curves. That's what makes a mystery novel interesting. It keeps the reader on their toes! Good job!
Patty
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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A great chapter again for sure! As the story goes on we find twists and curves. That's what makes a mystery novel interesting. It keeps the reader on their toes! Good job!
Patty
Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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Thanks, Patty... I try to keep you guessing and wondering what will happen next and then surprise you when something different occurs. LOL I so appreciate your time, kindness and review.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from BethShelby
I realize James' sister is pretending to be James' wife with dementia but where is his real wife and does she really have dementia? I guess it is Jaz James wants to frame by getting her prints on everything, so she will go to jail. You are doing a wonderful job with this. I'm so far behind on reviewing that I have no time to write, but I always read whatever you write.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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I realize James' sister is pretending to be James' wife with dementia but where is his real wife and does she really have dementia? I guess it is Jaz James wants to frame by getting her prints on everything, so she will go to jail. You are doing a wonderful job with this. I'm so far behind on reviewing that I have no time to write, but I always read whatever you write.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much, Beth... James's wife Marion does have dementia and is in a home (hidden). His sister took her place when she received the letter, and Samantha saw their names on the FBI list. Initially, Vfito (James) had planned on getting revenge against Allie by putting her sister in a porno movie, but it progressed to framing her like he blames Allie for writing an article accusing him. As a first-time, journalist her information came from the sheriff. It is now about to progress again as he uses her in the new million-dollar scam introduced by Sam. Hope that clears it up a little.
Thank you as always, Carol
Comment from Judy Lawless
So now we know that a film is being made that supposedly stars Jaz, but it doesn't. I can only guess what James and Charles plan to do with it, but we're still left wondering where Jaz really is. The plot thickens. Good work, Carol.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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So now we know that a film is being made that supposedly stars Jaz, but it doesn't. I can only guess what James and Charles plan to do with it, but we're still left wondering where Jaz really is. The plot thickens. Good work, Carol.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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I hope I am doing this story justice, because you and so many who continue to follow deserve a good story. I thank you for your friendship and your reviews.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Mind-blowing! Some answers, more questions--I'm trying to keep track of all the side plots. Meantime, I'm thrilled in the reading--you are a master of the genre!
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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Mind-blowing! Some answers, more questions--I'm trying to keep track of all the side plots. Meantime, I'm thrilled in the reading--you are a master of the genre!
Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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I hope I am doing this story justice, because you and so many who continue to follow deserve a good story. I thank you for your friendship and your reviews.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Jasmine Girl
James wants too much. If he already has everything he needed, then he will lose it all in the end and go to jail as the final destination. It's hard to make a fortune and harder to keep it. Who is Derek?
Well done.
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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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James wants too much. If he already has everything he needed, then he will lose it all in the end and go to jail as the final destination. It's hard to make a fortune and harder to keep it. Who is Derek?
Well done.
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Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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I hope I am doing this story justice, because you and so many who continue to follow deserve a good story. I thank you for your friendship and your reviews.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from prettybluebirds
Excellent. The story keeps getting better and better. I really like this chapter. You bring the scenario to life and I feel as if I am standing there watching the drama unfold. All I can do is keep reading and find out where you are going with this story. See you again soon. Good work.
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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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Excellent. The story keeps getting better and better. I really like this chapter. You bring the scenario to life and I feel as if I am standing there watching the drama unfold. All I can do is keep reading and find out where you are going with this story. See you again soon. Good work.
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Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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I hope I am doing this story justice, because you and so many who continue to follow deserve a good story. I thank you for your friendship and your reviews.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This story just gets better and better. I like how you are working in the background knowledge. You're doing a great job with that. I didn't find any errors in this. GREAT JOB!!!!!
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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This story just gets better and better. I like how you are working in the background knowledge. You're doing a great job with that. I didn't find any errors in this. GREAT JOB!!!!!
Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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Hurrah! I was so afraid the readers might get offended by the sexual undertones, but I've done my best to suggest not show ...letting the reader's mind fill in the blanks. I really appreciate that you enjoyed this chapter. Thank you so much.
Hugs, Carol