Revenge
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Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
A tour de force of repartee. Witty bit--to Marian: please call me Sam--all my friends do--then to James: please call me Samantha. You nailed it.
You'd think you'd [saw=>SEEN] a ghost
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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A tour de force of repartee. Witty bit--to Marian: please call me Sam--all my friends do--then to James: please call me Samantha. You nailed it.
You'd think you'd [saw=>SEEN] a ghost
Comment Written 31-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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I apologize that life has put me so far behind. I appreciate your thoughts and time.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Judy Lawless
You've added a new character to the fray and more intrigue, Carol. We'll be waiting to see where this is going. It seems Samantha has already raised Charles' ire. Great writing.
"James scowled as the two women disappear(ed) into the garden..."
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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You've added a new character to the fray and more intrigue, Carol. We'll be waiting to see where this is going. It seems Samantha has already raised Charles' ire. Great writing.
"James scowled as the two women disappear(ed) into the garden..."
Comment Written 31-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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I apologize that life has put me so far behind. I appreciate your thoughts and time.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
Nothing more destabilizing than a spicy Chiquita with nerves and possibly brains to use those passing flirtations to get in a man's pocket, or worse. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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Nothing more destabilizing than a spicy Chiquita with nerves and possibly brains to use those passing flirtations to get in a man's pocket, or worse. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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I apologize that life has put me so far behind. I appreciate your thoughts and time.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
Ummm! Good to see some glamour finding some place here! Interesting. Is she going to be a Matahari? The story is moving well and the characters are believable. I enjoyed your chapter. Keep them coming!
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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Ummm! Good to see some glamour finding some place here! Interesting. Is she going to be a Matahari? The story is moving well and the characters are believable. I enjoyed your chapter. Keep them coming!
Comment Written 31-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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I apologize that life has put me so far behind. I appreciate your thoughts and time.
Hugs, Carol
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No problem Carol. Take it easy and let's have your thrillers!:)
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
I thoroughly enjoyed your chapter. This is the first I've read in your book, but would love to follow its progress.
Your writing is flawless and engaging. Your characters works well together and their interactions seem to flow with their personalities. I suppose if I would like to know more, I should read more, which I intend to do.
Take care,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2021
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I thoroughly enjoyed your chapter. This is the first I've read in your book, but would love to follow its progress.
Your writing is flawless and engaging. Your characters works well together and their interactions seem to flow with their personalities. I suppose if I would like to know more, I should read more, which I intend to do.
Take care,
Rhonda
Comment Written 31-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2021
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I am so grateful to meet you this morning and blessed that you enjoyed this chapter in my story. Revenge is the fourth book in a series of mysteries and crimes. I would be so pleased if you continued to follow. Thank you, and have a fantastic day.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
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Are you published?
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No, but thank you for asking. When I finish this current book, I hope to polish them and submit the stories. I have a friend who has several books published and she has offered to guide me through the process. Smiles - Carol
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Great! Please let me know when you do!
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
"It's a beautiful peignoir. The color brings out the blue in your eyes. I remember watching films with the leading actresses posed on their lounge chairs or waltzing around the room, swishing the silky fabric, accenting their sex appeal and beauty. It suits you very well." Touches like this make for a very elegant and beautifully flowing read. I love your turns of phrase, a really excellent write I cannot fault it well done! Love and regards Meia xx
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"It's a beautiful peignoir. The color brings out the blue in your eyes. I remember watching films with the leading actresses posed on their lounge chairs or waltzing around the room, swishing the silky fabric, accenting their sex appeal and beauty. It suits you very well." Touches like this make for a very elegant and beautifully flowing read. I love your turns of phrase, a really excellent write I cannot fault it well done! Love and regards Meia xx
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Comment Written 31-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2021
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Thank you so much for your kind words and for taking the time to read one of the chapters in my novel. I am glad you enjoyed and hope you might return to follow the story.
Happy Halloween and have a great day! Carol
Comment from BethShelby
I don't remember Samantha from before. Maybe you've introduced us to a new character. I'm wondering what her angle is. She and Marian seemed to get along so well, I wonder if they'd met before. I don't know if Marian really has dementia or is only pretending to.
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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2021
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I don't remember Samantha from before. Maybe you've introduced us to a new character. I'm wondering what her angle is. She and Marian seemed to get along so well, I wonder if they'd met before. I don't know if Marian really has dementia or is only pretending to.
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Comment Written 31-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2021
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The next chapter shall answer several of your questions and maybe make you have a few more... Thanks for the review and your continued interest.
Hugs, Carol