Comment from Carol Clark2

Excellent

Great dialogue in this chapter, filling in many details for us. I don't know how you keep all these characters in your head. I love all the little items you include, like the unusual ring. Have a blessed weekend.

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2021

I can't seem to remember simple grammar corrections or where I left my keys, but the characters sort of live in my head and scream at me when it's their turn. LOL

Thanks again for the review and for enjoying my story.

Hugs, Carol

reply by Carol Clark2 on 30-Oct-2021

Oh, I know what you mean about the keys. Then there's the phone. Lol.

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Carol,

Well, I'm finally caught up again. --whew-- And more impressed than ever at your wonderful creativity. You work things out to the most minute details - it is crazy. But crazy like a fox. hahaha

Thanks so much!

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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021

I apologize that life has put me so far behind. I appreciate your thoughts and time.

Hugs, Carol

Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

Kind like pitching chips of information in an evidence basket the clues pile up. People all around everywhere, but just like in real life, they never seem to see or hear too much because they are drunk or caught up in their own situations. Thanks for sharing. :-)

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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021

I apologize that life has put me so far behind. I appreciate your thoughts and time.

Hugs, Carol

Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

You are moving this along nicely. It seems the FBI has made Thomas's day. Vito may have hoped the wig and script would be found but he probably wouldn't want them remembering the ring.

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2021

Good for you, Beth. Yes, the ring would be something he wouldn't want anyone to remember... it is one of a kind and definitely stands out to point the finger at someone.

thanks for the review. Always, Carol

Comment from royowen

Exceptional

So the young Thomas got witness what was going on on the so-called movie set. He was told to move off the the set bu a badge toting man, and it sounds like it could very well be Sherif Welcher, Tango feels like it could well be him, and I think Garth wants to bring him dow apes or two. Great episode, well done, blessings Roy

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2021

Oh, thank you for raising my spirits this morning, dear friend. I was beginning to fear my clues were too subtle because some weren't catching on to the "dropped crumbs." Our Sheriff has a hidden past that just might rock some people....

Thanks as always. Enjoy your day!

Smiles and hugs, Carol

reply by royowen on 30-Oct-2021

Well done

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

I do hope he does train Thomas, what a payback that would be! Lol. We learned a lot in this chapter, Carol, I have to admire you for the way you are able to get them out so quick!! I didn't trust that Welcher, either, I bet it was him that told Thomas to push off. Now to see how much they have when they sit down with the others. Well done, my friend! :)) Sandra xxx

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2021

Thanks you, Sandra. In the early morning hours when all the girls are asleep, my brain seems to flow... before all the ugliness seeps back in.. and I can almost write the chapter like I'd been there already. (Minus by grammar errors of course) It's the best time of the day for me. No school today so i actually might get more time. Hurrah!

Glad you caught on to Welcher...

Smiles and hugs, Carol

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

Had to read it straight away! Those young ones were very observant and helpful, but it is very likely they are in danger from these unscrupulous killers. I keep holding my breath with every new development. If it was the sheriff (Welcher) who warned off Thomas, what was he doing there just at that very moment? (I know you won't tell me, not yet anyway!) Great writing as always.
Wendy

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2021

Thanks so much, Wendy. I am thrilled that you caught the clue about Welcher. I always wonder if my clues are too subtle, because some don't always get the connections.

As always, i appreciate you more than you will every know.

Hugs, Carol