Comment from royowen

Excellent

More evidence that Sherrif Welchor received, and he wasn't a happy Chappy, proving that Garth was right about the suspicions he had of foul play concerning Allie's sister Jaz. She's missing Pam but they discovered someone had used Jazz's credit card. Beautifully written Carol great episode, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2021

Thanks so much for the review and for enjoying my story. I hope it continues to draw your interest into the plot.

Hugs, Carol

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

You did a great job brewing the irritation between Garth and the defensive Sherriff. I also liked the banter between Hank and Emmy. Guess now they have another murder on their hands but who could that one be? Was this one staged by Vito, too? He's doing more crime than he ever did before he got the can for a crime he didn't do.

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2021

Thanks so much for the review and for enjoying my story. I hope it continues to draw your interest into the plot.

Hugs, Carol

Comment from Judy Lawless

Excellent

Another murder already! This guy's revenge runs deep, but you're building a mystery around what his plans are for Allie and how he's going to trap her. Well done, Carol.

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2021

Thanks so much for the review and for enjoying my story. I hope it continues to draw your interest into the plot.

Hugs, Carol

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Your chapter in the book Revenge
Revenge - Chap 8
Begin Again I wonder . Who murdered the girl and, who left Jaz's stuff on the beach, and why?". I will be waiting for your answer?
Gert












. Who murdered the girl and, who left Jaz's stuff on the beach, but why?".

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2021

Thanks so much for the review and for enjoying my story. I hope it continues to draw your interest into the plot.

Hugs, Carol

reply by Gert sherwood on 28-Oct-2021

You are welcome
Begin Again
Gert

Comment from Carol Clark2

Excellent

Very interesting confrontation between Sheriff Welcher and Garth. Now another body has been found. Vito is certainly diabolical in his quest for revenge. Enjoying your great writing. Blessings. Carol

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2021

Thanks so much for the review and for enjoying my story. I hope it continues to draw your interest into the plot.

Hugs, Carol

Comment from Ric Myworld

Exceptional

Almost trapped in a bad situation, I would presume. Not that all your created situations are bad ones. LOL. Cheers, and here's to a better week ahead, than the week behind. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2021

Oh I so wish I could find a better week. Hope you are feeling okay. When did you say you were going back to the hospital? I will be worrying about you... I have a long list. lol but you are at the top!

Smiles, Carol

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I'm betting it's not Jasmine either but another hoax. This is building better and better. I can't wait for more answers. You're doing a good job writing this. Keep up the good work.

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2021

Thanks so much for the review and for enjoying my story. I hope it continues to draw your interest into the plot.

Hugs, Carol

Comment from Jasmine Girl

Excellent

The Sheriff is not curious about the murder and the reason why Angel was murdered not Jaz. But Jaz's things were everywhere near the victim.

What a twisted plot.

Well done.

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2021

Thanks so much for the review and for enjoying my story. I hope it continues to draw your interest into the plot.

Hugs, Carol

Comment from Elizabeth Emerald

Excellent

Gripping--dizzying! Twist after twist after twist ... seems the bad guys are continuing to torment Allie by leading her believe that each victim is Jaz. Diabolical. The butting of heads between Garth and the detective is brilliant.


Emmy is searching her phone as we speak for the area." SUGG:
As we speak, Emmy is searching her phone for the area."

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2021

Thanks so much for the review and for enjoying my story. I hope it continues to draw your interest into the plot.

Hugs, Carol

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

How many more girls have got to die to avenge Vito's stay in prison? And where is Jaz? This is a really top-notch crime mystery, Carol. I'm glad the Sheriff had to climb down off his high horse. I wonder if he'll go crawling for help now. You have so much going on in this story, it's brilliant. Well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xx

How are you? You are so quiet these days, I hope it's not all getting on top of you. Sending you loads of love. xxx

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 Comment Written 24-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021

Thank you from the bottom of my heart. Six more days and I hope a decision is made. Love you, Carol