Revenge
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "In The Heat of Revenge"Evil stalks the dynamic crime team
29 total reviews
Comment from Patty Palmer
I enjoyed the beginning of your new book. I love that it is picking up from Secrets in the Wind. It's neat to already know some of the characters. Hope you are having a great day!
Patty
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
  |
I enjoyed the beginning of your new book. I love that it is picking up from Secrets in the Wind. It's neat to already know some of the characters. Hope you are having a great day!
Patty
Comment Written 12-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
-
Thank you for taking the time to read, enjoy and review my story. It means a great deal to me and I truly appreciate it.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from lancellot
Well, that just like a criminal. How dare you send me to prison for committing crimes? Like movies where crooks want revenge against the police for catching them.
I guess those pictures will come back later in the story. Good job setting things up in a believable way. Even the passcode is realistic. We don't change them.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
 |
Well, that just like a criminal. How dare you send me to prison for committing crimes? Like movies where crooks want revenge against the police for catching them.
I guess those pictures will come back later in the story. Good job setting things up in a believable way. Even the passcode is realistic. We don't change them.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
-
Thank you for taking the time to read, enjoy and review my story. It means a great deal to me and I truly appreciate it.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from LJbutterfly
Wow! We are off to an exciting ride. I say "we," because you put the reader in the middle of your stories with great descriptions, emotions, and detail. You have built the suspense so that in one instance we think we know what's going to happen, and in another, we can't imagine what's will happen next. It's going to be wild, but I'm going on this roller coaster with you.
There is one word you might want to take a look at. "stilling"
"Yeah, I started down the wrong road at nineteen, and I'm stilling traveling it.
See you in the next chapter.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
|
Wow! We are off to an exciting ride. I say "we," because you put the reader in the middle of your stories with great descriptions, emotions, and detail. You have built the suspense so that in one instance we think we know what's going to happen, and in another, we can't imagine what's will happen next. It's going to be wild, but I'm going on this roller coaster with you.
There is one word you might want to take a look at. "stilling"
"Yeah, I started down the wrong road at nineteen, and I'm stilling traveling it.
See you in the next chapter.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
-
Thank you for taking the time to read, enjoy and review my story. It means a great deal to me and I truly appreciate it.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
How come all the bad guys are usually Italian? I mean, I'm just wondering, but it really does seem that way in everything I read. If I weren't openminded, I might start thinking that all Italians, are wops, dagos, and damn fools. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2021
|
How come all the bad guys are usually Italian? I mean, I'm just wondering, but it really does seem that way in everything I read. If I weren't openminded, I might start thinking that all Italians, are wops, dagos, and damn fools. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2021
-
Forgive me please for my poor display of gratitude and appreciation. I truly am grateful for all your time, your review and your thoughtfulness. I'm struggling with life and I apologize for neglecting your efforts. I am weeks behind in responding so I must at least cut and paste a thank you and hope you understand. I am thrilled that you have taken the time to read my story and to enjoy it.
Smiles, hugs and much love for all the support.
Carol
-
You just worry about you and yours! Everything on this end will take care of itself. :-)
Comment from Sherry Asbury
Well, I read 2 before I read this...just like me! This is great. You have drawn me into a lifestyle scenario beyond anything I will ever know - and I love it... fantasy, dreaming...imagining...wow... This is great and I salivate for more!!
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
|
Well, I read 2 before I read this...just like me! This is great. You have drawn me into a lifestyle scenario beyond anything I will ever know - and I love it... fantasy, dreaming...imagining...wow... This is great and I salivate for more!!
Comment Written 11-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
-
Thank you for taking the time to read, enjoy and review my story. It means a great deal to me and I truly appreciate it.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from robyn corum
Carol,
Wow. I'm so proud of you. It's stunning that you are already up and running with another story. But why are you getting these published, my friend? That's where you're supposed to be right now!
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
|
Carol,
Wow. I'm so proud of you. It's stunning that you are already up and running with another story. But why are you getting these published, my friend? That's where you're supposed to be right now!
Comment Written 11-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
-
I know but life has thrown me a gigantic curve and my dreams of publishing are on hold while I struggle to hold my family together. Thank you so much for your kind review and thoughts.
Always, Carol
-
oh, no. PM?
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
You don't come up for air! Off and running with a bang, bang, bang of exploding "whipped cream" cans on the "drunk woman." These characters are chilling. Gripping. You had me at "wild weekend."
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
|
You don't come up for air! Off and running with a bang, bang, bang of exploding "whipped cream" cans on the "drunk woman." These characters are chilling. Gripping. You had me at "wild weekend."
Comment Written 10-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
-
Writing is my salvation and air at the moment... When I am gasping and going down for the count, I try to write. Hopefully, the story won't be hindered because of it.
Thanks for the review and kindness.
Hugs, Carol
-
Be assured: you're at the top of your game! Hang in as best you can.
Comment from Carol Clark2
This is a great beginning to another book. It sounds like it's going to be quite a ride, so I'll fasten my seatbelt! Lol. Thanks for the helpful character listing. Hope you're doing better these days. Blessings and prayers. Carol
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
|
This is a great beginning to another book. It sounds like it's going to be quite a ride, so I'll fasten my seatbelt! Lol. Thanks for the helpful character listing. Hope you're doing better these days. Blessings and prayers. Carol
Comment Written 10-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
-
Hello - and thank you for reading and your kind review. As always, I am running far behind because life keeps dragging me down. I hope you continue to enjoy this story - don't fall off!
Take care, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
This looks like being an action packed story - and Henry will have all the evidence of this particular crime on his camera - but probably won't realize. Looking forward to the back-story - why she was murdered, and of course the eventual solution, doubtless after lots of intrigue!
Wendy
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
|
This looks like being an action packed story - and Henry will have all the evidence of this particular crime on his camera - but probably won't realize. Looking forward to the back-story - why she was murdered, and of course the eventual solution, doubtless after lots of intrigue!
Wendy
Comment Written 10-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
-
Poor girl was in the wrong place at the wrong time, I think. Crime finds its solutions in bad places and doesn't seem to care who it drags down with it.
Thanks for the review and I hope you continue to enjoy the story.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from royowen
I wondered what happened to you Carol. Is there light at the end of the tunnel yet? Great beginning to this story, you always throw in a good beginning, I've read stories in the past that started slowly, and nearly got discouraged, but they warmed as the story, yours get into the warm up very quickly. Well done good seeeing you again, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
|
I wondered what happened to you Carol. Is there light at the end of the tunnel yet? Great beginning to this story, you always throw in a good beginning, I've read stories in the past that started slowly, and nearly got discouraged, but they warmed as the story, yours get into the warm up very quickly. Well done good seeeing you again, blessings Roy
Comment Written 10-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
-
It's darker than a Halloween story, Roy... but I am still trying to keep my head above water.
I like to draw the reader in with a big bang and hope that I can hold their attention as the story moves forward. Guess that's why i have so many twists and turns.
Thanks so much - Carol
-
Pouring yourself into writing keeps one a little sane, mine always leads back to God, yours too.