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Zhen Xuan Liu
I love this general poetry! I enjoy its simplicity and deep feelings it conveys. It flows well! Last stanza is my favorite:
The child can laugh
And spread her song
But that too soon
As well is gone
Keep up the good work!
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Comment Written 02-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
Thank you very much for your kind and thoughtful review.