Autumn's Serenade
ABC poetic form43 total reviews
Comment from Dawn Munro
Ah, simply sublime! I think I must have just read the winner of this contest -- if I haven't, I sure don't want to miss anything that could top this one. Best of luck.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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Ah, simply sublime! I think I must have just read the winner of this contest -- if I haven't, I sure don't want to miss anything that could top this one. Best of luck.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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Hi Dawn. Thank you so very much for your lovely words and delightful review. Hugs, my friend!!!
Melissa
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It was my pleasure!
Comment from kahpot
Wow! I like this one, such short lines yet it flows so wonderfully, I like your photo though your words give a much better image, an excellent poem, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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Wow! I like this one, such short lines yet it flows so wonderfully, I like your photo though your words give a much better image, an excellent poem, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 01-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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Hi Kym. Thank you so very much for your lovely words in this review. You really encourage me! :)
Melissa
Comment from June Sargent
This was a lovely entry for the contest. Great imagery and rhythm. Your poem embraces the senses of sight and sound. Great job! Should be a winner.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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This was a lovely entry for the contest. Great imagery and rhythm. Your poem embraces the senses of sight and sound. Great job! Should be a winner.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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Hello June. Thank you for your lovely words!!! I so appreciate your appraisal and comments on this one. Hugs!
Melissa
Comment from Irish Rain
Easily worthy of 10 stars, this is just a gorgeous entry in the ABC contest. The picture is just too very lovely. Best of luck to you Miss Melissa, blessings...
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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Easily worthy of 10 stars, this is just a gorgeous entry in the ABC contest. The picture is just too very lovely. Best of luck to you Miss Melissa, blessings...
Comment Written 01-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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Hi Judy... You have made my day with your comments!! I am so delighted you liked it and enjoyed my little entry. I am so ready for Autumn to arrive. As you know, Virginia is still a verdant green. We did have a whisper of cool air this morning here in Chester. :). Fall is on its way. :). Thanks again, my friend.!
Melissa
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Oh, it's definitely on its way!!! I decorated with pumpkins everywhere today...I'm ready too!! Loved your poem!!
Comment from royowen
What a superb entry in this ABC poetry contest, but then, that doesn't surprise me. You are such a versatile all-round clever and skilful wordsmith Melissa, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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What a superb entry in this ABC poetry contest, but then, that doesn't surprise me. You are such a versatile all-round clever and skilful wordsmith Melissa, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 01-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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Hi Roy. Thank you for your kind words about this little entry. Your encouragement is sweet honey to my soul. :). I always appreciate reading your perspective on my poetry!!! Thanks again.
Melissa
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Bless you Melissa
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This is excellent and worthy of winning a contest! I hope you do. I love the rhyming and the subject matter very much! Autumn's here and, it needs to be written, about! An ABC poem is one of the best ways of doing it!
My favorite line is the last one that says 'elusive, golden melodies.' Very nicely done!
Have a wonderful day,
Jesse
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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This is excellent and worthy of winning a contest! I hope you do. I love the rhyming and the subject matter very much! Autumn's here and, it needs to be written, about! An ABC poem is one of the best ways of doing it!
My favorite line is the last one that says 'elusive, golden melodies.' Very nicely done!
Have a wonderful day,
Jesse
Comment Written 01-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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Hello Jesse. I hope you are enjoying a lovely day. Thank you so very much for your comments and perspective on this little entry. I appreciate you stopping by to chat. :)
Melissa
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Good evening, Melissa.
I am glad you liked my review and proud to say I made it through the day.
I would love to chat more with you but, it is evening, and I am ready for bed.
Have a good night,
Jesse
Comment from robyn corum
Melissa,
Very nice! This was six-worthy, but my chest is empty. I loved the unusual word choices that set this into a different realm. They made my mind go deeper, farther. So I saw richer, more complex. Lovely, lovely!
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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Melissa,
Very nice! This was six-worthy, but my chest is empty. I loved the unusual word choices that set this into a different realm. They made my mind go deeper, farther. So I saw richer, more complex. Lovely, lovely!
Comment Written 01-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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Thanks so very much Robyn. I am delighted you liked it and stopped by to chat. Hugs!
Melissa
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your ABC poem is exceptional in every respect--skillfully composed and vividly descriptive of the majestic changes engendered by autumn. Word choices are expressive and appealing.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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Your ABC poem is exceptional in every respect--skillfully composed and vividly descriptive of the majestic changes engendered by autumn. Word choices are expressive and appealing.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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Hello Janice. Thank you so very much, my friend. Your delightful words encourage me!! :)
Melissa
Comment from dragonpoet
Melissa,
This poem seems to weave colors into metaphors for sound. You have good imgery in this poem and chose apt artwork.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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Melissa,
This poem seems to weave colors into metaphors for sound. You have good imgery in this poem and chose apt artwork.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
Comment Written 01-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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Thank you so very much Joan!! I really appreciate your thoughts on this verse!
Melissa
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You are most kindly welcome, Melissa.
Joan
Comment from pookietoo
I love all the descriptions you used to describe Autumn. Such a beautiful photo and a nice ABC poem. Good luck to you in the contest. Enjoy the little things.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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I love all the descriptions you used to describe Autumn. Such a beautiful photo and a nice ABC poem. Good luck to you in the contest. Enjoy the little things.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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Hey there! Thank you so much for this lovely review!!
Melissa
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Welcome.