Tribute to Crzypntr.
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25 total reviews
Comment from aryr
This was a wonderful tribute to August. The picture was perfect and I agree that the video was one of the best I have heard of 'Amazing Grace'. Your words of the modified kyrielle were not only beautiful but heart wrenching. Very well done.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021
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This was a wonderful tribute to August. The picture was perfect and I agree that the video was one of the best I have heard of 'Amazing Grace'. Your words of the modified kyrielle were not only beautiful but heart wrenching. Very well done.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021
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Thank you, aryr, for your great review.
I appreciate your time.
Respectfully, Jan
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Most welcome, Jan.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine tribute to your friendship with this Fanstory poet Jan, I did not know him and your tributary poem is a fine legacy for the friendship you shared, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021
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A fine tribute to your friendship with this Fanstory poet Jan, I did not know him and your tributary poem is a fine legacy for the friendship you shared, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021
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Much appreciaitve, Dolly, of your time reading and reviewing.
Thank you.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment from Gloria ....
Very nice tribute to August here. You have illustrated his faith, which was a big part of his life, and have sent off with a beautiful hymn.
Very nicely done, and a pleasure to read and review.
Gloria
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021
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Very nice tribute to August here. You have illustrated his faith, which was a big part of his life, and have sent off with a beautiful hymn.
Very nicely done, and a pleasure to read and review.
Gloria
Comment Written 16-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021
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Thank you, Gloria, for your great review.
Means much to me.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment from Midi O'Rourke
Beautiful poem, very well written and a wonderful tribute. I only know him through other peoples words. He sounds like a wonderful person. He certainly affected many lives.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021
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Beautiful poem, very well written and a wonderful tribute. I only know him through other peoples words. He sounds like a wonderful person. He certainly affected many lives.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021
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Thank you, Midi, for taking time to read and review my tribute.
Means much to me.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment from damommy
You've written a lovely tribute to this lovely man. I know his family will appreciate it very much. You always find the most fantastic videos, and this one is no exception!
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021
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You've written a lovely tribute to this lovely man. I know his family will appreciate it very much. You always find the most fantastic videos, and this one is no exception!
Comment Written 15-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021
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Thank you, Yvonne, for your great review and comments.
Both mean much to me as does your support.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment from Sally Law
I had a few brief moments with August. He was a real talent and a dear thing. Thank you for the sweet tribute. So very sorry for your loss, dearest Jan. Sending you my best today as always and comfort from above,
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021
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I had a few brief moments with August. He was a real talent and a dear thing. Thank you for the sweet tribute. So very sorry for your loss, dearest Jan. Sending you my best today as always and comfort from above,
Sal XOs
Comment Written 15-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021
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Thank you, Sally, for taking time to read and review my tribute.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
I like your poem. You give encouragement. The fellow who was a writer in your poem is praising the Lord with his words right now. I think we can write and also sing at the same time. I feel like their are some people who like to tell us what we can and cannot do. When you are not a writer, do you comment?
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021
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I like your poem. You give encouragement. The fellow who was a writer in your poem is praising the Lord with his words right now. I think we can write and also sing at the same time. I feel like their are some people who like to tell us what we can and cannot do. When you are not a writer, do you comment?
Comment Written 15-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021
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Thank you, Rosy, for dropping by to read and review my tribute.
Much appreciated.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Jan.
Your tribute poem to August is very well written. I commend you for submitting the work to commemorate his passing. It is an excellent contribution to the book.
Robert
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021
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Hello Jan.
Your tribute poem to August is very well written. I commend you for submitting the work to commemorate his passing. It is an excellent contribution to the book.
Robert
Comment Written 15-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021
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Most appreciative of your time reading and reviewing my tribute.
Thank you.
Respectfully, Jan
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You're very welcome
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and
presentation, Jan.
-You wrote a good
tribute for August with
effective imagery, rhyme,
and repeating line.
-I did not know him well,
but he always seemed like
a very kind and caring person.
-Thanks for sharing this.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021
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-Very nice image and
presentation, Jan.
-You wrote a good
tribute for August with
effective imagery, rhyme,
and repeating line.
-I did not know him well,
but he always seemed like
a very kind and caring person.
-Thanks for sharing this.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021
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Thank you, Pam, for your gr4at and detailed review.
Means much to me.
Respectfully, Jan
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You are very welcome, Jan.
Comment from royowen
Thank you, thank you Jan for posting this wonderful tribute to August. I only recently discovered that started "Carpenters for Christ." Sinking his own money into the enterprise to benefit others, now that's using one's gifts to benefit others. Beautifully written this in his honour Jan, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021
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Thank you, thank you Jan for posting this wonderful tribute to August. I only recently discovered that started "Carpenters for Christ." Sinking his own money into the enterprise to benefit others, now that's using one's gifts to benefit others. Beautifully written this in his honour Jan, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 15-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021
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Thank you, Roy, for your time reading, reviewing, and commenting on my tribute.
All are appreciated.
Respectfully, Jan
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Most welcome
