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Tribute to Crzypntr.

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A memorial to a brother writer

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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Your tribute is straight from your heart, Yvonne. Your words are comforting and descriptive. I enjoyed reading your contribution though the reason is sad. I believe the family will take comfort in your well thought out words.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
    Thank you.
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Very nice image
and presentation.
-You wrote a very nice
tribute to August.
-I didn't know him well, either,
but tried to review his work
when I saw it; he reviewed me
occasionally, and I agree with
your assessment. He seemed very
kind and cared about people.
-I am sure his family will
appreciate this very much.

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2021


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    Thank you.
reply by Pam (respa) on 16-Sep-2021
    You are welcome.
Comment from judiverse
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Beautiful thoughts, and you found such inspiring artwork. I didn't know August's work. It brings to mind that there are so many worthy writers on the site that I don't follow because of lack of time. You do a great job of describing his writing and the fact that he wrote from the heart. You end with the optimistic thought that he can share his talent with the saints in Heaven. judi

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2021


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    Thank you.
reply by judiverse on 16-Sep-2021
    You're very welcome. judi
Comment from l.raven
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Hi Yvonne, such beautiful words my sweet friend...
he truly was a talented and kind man...and he will be missed by so many...he is in his forever home...

I love your poem sweet girl...and love your stunning picture...so very nicely written...love you...Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2021


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    Thank you.
reply by l.raven on 15-Sep-2021
    your so welcome...love xxoo
Comment from lyenochka
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Thank you for adding your kind words, Yvonne. I was debating whether to say anything because in all my five years here, his path and mine have never crossed so I didn't feel qualified to say anything. I just reviewed his last poem.

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2021


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    Thank you.
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
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Hello Yvonne.

Your tribute poem to August is very well written. I commend you for submitting the work to commemorate his passing. It is an excellent contribution to the book.

Robert

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2021


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    Thank you.
Comment from pookietoo
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Wonderful tribute to August. I enjoyed reading this poem. Keep smiling. Keep up the great work writing your poems. Good luck to you and best wishes

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2021


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    Thank you.
reply by pookietoo on 15-Sep-2021
    You are welcome.I would appreciate your review on my Jessica's year of seeing nature story.
Comment from robyn corum
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Yvonne,

This is beautiful and just exactly right. This kind of message shows the nature of this caring and generous community - and YOU. Thank you soooo much for the big heart you have and for always reaching out. Hugs to you!!

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
    Thank you for asking me. Hugs to you, too!
Comment from BethShelby
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This is a nice tribute. I don't think I've read anything he worte but If I can find his portfolio I will read some of his poetry, It seems we have lot a lot of people since the first time I was on this site.

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 Comment Written 15-Sep-2021


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    I didn't know him well, but his poetry was heartfelt.
Comment from SHABAMO
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Very good of you to help commemorate another port that I am assuming wrote here on fanstory. I think explaining what your intent and what you're doing in the notes would help :-)

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 Comment Written 15-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
    Thank you.