Untethered Dreams
two line poetry29 total reviews
Comment from MAMONIA
What a lovely idea this is and with the perfect photo to match your words.
This is ideal and I find the words so inspiring.
I'm looking over your portfolio and cannot believe that you have only begun to write but three years ago. You were born to do this.
Very enjoyable piece and I look forward to seeing more of your works.
My best,
Marie
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2021
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What a lovely idea this is and with the perfect photo to match your words.
This is ideal and I find the words so inspiring.
I'm looking over your portfolio and cannot believe that you have only begun to write but three years ago. You were born to do this.
Very enjoyable piece and I look forward to seeing more of your works.
My best,
Marie
Comment Written 17-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2021
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Hello Marie. Your lovely review encourages me so much. Poetry really means a lot to me. I love to daydream and think up ideas and phrases for my poems. Thank you.
Melissa
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Hello Marie. Your lovely review encourages me so much. Poetry really means a lot to me. I love to daydream and think up ideas and phrases for my poems. Thank you.
Melissa
Comment from jenintorre
This is a great two line poem. I seem to live inside daydreams most of the time it seems, possibly a poet thing.Lovely artwork and presentation. Good luck in the competition. Jen.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2021
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This is a great two line poem. I seem to live inside daydreams most of the time it seems, possibly a poet thing.Lovely artwork and presentation. Good luck in the competition. Jen.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2021
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Hello Jen. Thanks so very much for your lovely words!!
Melissa
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Hello Jen. Thanks so very much for your lovely words!!
Melissa
Comment from kahpot
Oh-Wow! what an image both in word and artwork, when we find our peace and quiet dreams come alive, exceptional in so few words, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2021
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Oh-Wow! what an image both in word and artwork, when we find our peace and quiet dreams come alive, exceptional in so few words, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 17-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2021
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Hello Kym. Thanks so very much for your wonderful review and rating. I appreciate this vote of confidence .. it encourages me to keep writing.
Melissa
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Daydreaming is the privilege of the very young and the very old! He he he, a fun post Melissa, much enjoyed, a fine two line poem for the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2021
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Daydreaming is the privilege of the very young and the very old! He he he, a fun post Melissa, much enjoyed, a fine two line poem for the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2021
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Thanks so much for your lovely words, Dolly.
Melissa
Comment from Katie Mae Dead
These shorter forms must be hard to do and you've made it look so effortless.
God rhyme and it flows smoothly for being a two-lined poem.
You've effectively conquered this challenge and I wish you the best in the contest.
Katiemae
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2021
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These shorter forms must be hard to do and you've made it look so effortless.
God rhyme and it flows smoothly for being a two-lined poem.
You've effectively conquered this challenge and I wish you the best in the contest.
Katiemae
Comment Written 16-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2021
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Thank you very much Katie! :)
Melissa
Comment from dellsworthpoet
A beautiful expression of how daydreams feel. Cool, flowing and encompassing. The word choice is simple and yet flowing.
Thank you for sharing. Keep writing.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2021
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A beautiful expression of how daydreams feel. Cool, flowing and encompassing. The word choice is simple and yet flowing.
Thank you for sharing. Keep writing.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2021
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Hello Dell? thanks so very much for your lovely words.
Melissa
Comment from Mark D. R.
Melissa,
I aspire to write poetry akin to your entry rather than the cutesy stuff I pen. Terrific combo of illustration, rhymes, and verse story.
Mark
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2021
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Melissa,
I aspire to write poetry akin to your entry rather than the cutesy stuff I pen. Terrific combo of illustration, rhymes, and verse story.
Mark
Comment Written 16-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2021
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Hi Mark. Thanks so very much, my friend.
Melissa
Comment from Sharon Davis
A succinct sentiment described well in just two lines.
The artwork suits the piece perfectly, a visual reinforcement of the poem's theme.
Well composed and presented.
Great job.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2021
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A succinct sentiment described well in just two lines.
The artwork suits the piece perfectly, a visual reinforcement of the poem's theme.
Well composed and presented.
Great job.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2021
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Hello Sharon. Thanks so much.
Melissa
Comment from Mrs. KT
I do as well, Melissa!
Actually, I am more often found in my gardens when I am daydreaming... or falling... but "inside daydreams" describes my life perfectly!
An excellent two line poem!
Loved the thoughts and imagery!
Best Wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2021
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I do as well, Melissa!
Actually, I am more often found in my gardens when I am daydreaming... or falling... but "inside daydreams" describes my life perfectly!
An excellent two line poem!
Loved the thoughts and imagery!
Best Wishes!
diane
Comment Written 16-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2021
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Hi Diane. I have always recognized you as a fellow daydreamer. It shows in your clever and imaginative poetry. Thanks so much. I truly hope you are healing quickly!!!
Melissa
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Beautiful artwork, Melissa.
-You have written a very good
essence poem that meets
all of the requirements.
-Good syllable count and rhymes.
-The imagery is peaceful and inviting
and "full of daydreams."
-This is a nice segue to my
poem for Sun.:)
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2021
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-Beautiful artwork, Melissa.
-You have written a very good
essence poem that meets
all of the requirements.
-Good syllable count and rhymes.
-The imagery is peaceful and inviting
and "full of daydreams."
-This is a nice segue to my
poem for Sun.:)
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2021
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Thank you Pam. A lovely review :). I am going over to your page now to read your poem. :)
Melissa
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You are welcome, Melissa. The poem isn't until Sunday.
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Well, I went to your page and looked and looked. LOL
M
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Sorry 'bout that, M.