Atmosphere of Blue
A poem inspired by color15 total reviews
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Elegant imagery in vivid blue--you mentioned clouds and topaz too--are you allowed to include other colors? Sugg: google shades of blue rather than just say blue (e.g. cerulean, indigo, cobalt, royal, teal ... )
...https://www.google.com/search?q=shades+of+blue
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Elegant imagery in vivid blue--you mentioned clouds and topaz too--are you allowed to include other colors? Sugg: google shades of blue rather than just say blue (e.g. cerulean, indigo, cobalt, royal, teal ... )
...https://www.google.com/search?q=shades+of+blue
Comment Written 13-Jul-2021
Comment from Senyai
Hi Mystery Writer,
This is indeed a lovely calming poem conveying the distant vistas in blue, the oceans vast expanse of blue, the rising mountains in hues of blue.
It is a most polished and perfected poem that surely will excel in the contest.
One possible typo in the first line of the last stanza ...
"No matter were this color shows" (where or what?)
Thank you for sharing your amazing words with me today!
Senyai
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2021
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Hi Mystery Writer,
This is indeed a lovely calming poem conveying the distant vistas in blue, the oceans vast expanse of blue, the rising mountains in hues of blue.
It is a most polished and perfected poem that surely will excel in the contest.
One possible typo in the first line of the last stanza ...
"No matter were this color shows" (where or what?)
Thank you for sharing your amazing words with me today!
Senyai
Comment Written 13-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2021
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Hi Senyai, Thank for helping me with my error! I'm glad you felt the calm within the poem. That's exactly what I wanted you to feel.Thanks for the great review! :o) Helvi
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
I like it, mostly because I can understand it. You picked a good picture also. You have made blue a hero among the colors, there's nothing false about it. Thanks for the smile.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2021
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I like it, mostly because I can understand it. You picked a good picture also. You have made blue a hero among the colors, there's nothing false about it. Thanks for the smile.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2021
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Hi Carol, Your'e not alone in trying to figure out how to read some poetry. I'm a poet and some of it is over my head! I want to make my poetry easy to understand so you truly enjoy the feelings within. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem and got a smile out of it too!
Thanks for the great review! :o) Helvi
Comment from Michele Harber
This poem is so sweet. You did, indeed, find several things in nature to represent the beauty and varying shades of the color blue. The lovely photo, where the blue of the sea meets the blue of the sky, is the perfect accompaniment, as is the blue background you chose. I do have a minor suggestion that you add apostrophes to the possessives in your poem. Otherwise, you did a beautiful job, and the poem is as calming and relaxing as you'd hoped.
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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2021
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This poem is so sweet. You did, indeed, find several things in nature to represent the beauty and varying shades of the color blue. The lovely photo, where the blue of the sea meets the blue of the sky, is the perfect accompaniment, as is the blue background you chose. I do have a minor suggestion that you add apostrophes to the possessives in your poem. Otherwise, you did a beautiful job, and the poem is as calming and relaxing as you'd hoped.
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Comment Written 13-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2021
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Hi Michelle, You defiinitely made my day with such a beautiful review! Thank you for the wonderful compliments and your help with my error. I so glad you had a calming experience with this! :o) Helvi
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It's my pleasure, Helvi. I truly enjoyed this, and I'm glad I was able to help in my small way.
Comment from Jarvis Popovich
Clap clap clap! Very good poem :) I enjoyed reading it aloud. It flowed nicely and easy on my head to read. You're right to say float along :)
The rhyming was on point and measure was great!
Keep up the good work!
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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2021
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Clap clap clap! Very good poem :) I enjoyed reading it aloud. It flowed nicely and easy on my head to read. You're right to say float along :)
The rhyming was on point and measure was great!
Keep up the good work!
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Comment Written 13-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2021
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Hi Jarvis, to know you were clapping sio heartily hen you read my poem brings me great joy! I always ty to write so readers can easily relate to the poem and feel every exression without being in a state of confuson! Thank you for the wonderfil review!. Sorry this was so late in coming, I had some computer issues! :o) Helvi
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You?re welcome! :)
