The Chronicals Of Bethica: The Rise
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "The Chronicles Of Bethica"Abram must defeat a deadly humanoid race of beings
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Comment from Ulla
Hi Amahra, I loved this chapter and continuation to the story. It is vet well written and the conversation flows freely. I still have to learn so much about this story, but that doesn't mean I don't enjoy it, because I do. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2021
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Hi Amahra, I loved this chapter and continuation to the story. It is vet well written and the conversation flows freely. I still have to learn so much about this story, but that doesn't mean I don't enjoy it, because I do. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 11-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2021
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Thank you, Ulla. The gods have tricked Gangus into this "New Land Paradise Journey." Sort of like the 16th century Europeans coming to the New World (America) Gangus hasn't figured it out yet, but he smells a rat. Hope that helps a little.
Comment from Andy Sea
A wonderful tale, amahra. Kept me keen to read more right the way through. Vivid detail creates so much authenticity. It shows what a terrifying realm Shinee must be. The Chronicles of Bethica looks a fantastic read.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2021
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A wonderful tale, amahra. Kept me keen to read more right the way through. Vivid detail creates so much authenticity. It shows what a terrifying realm Shinee must be. The Chronicles of Bethica looks a fantastic read.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2021
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Thank you so much, Andy. I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I agree I'm not sure who they'd have to protect either. I think it would be and may possibly get very interesting. LOL Another good write.
It was during this time that our ancestors migrated from Kalobus- (you can omit 'that' its an extra word)
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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2021
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I agree I'm not sure who they'd have to protect either. I think it would be and may possibly get very interesting. LOL Another good write.
It was during this time that our ancestors migrated from Kalobus- (you can omit 'that' its an extra word)
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Comment Written 11-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2021
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Thank you, Barbara. Yeah, 'that' can be omitted.
Comment from Theodore McDowell
It was nice to pick back up with this story. An interesting back story!!!!!!! Adds some context to the two people they are taking back to their homeland. I also liked the weaving in of religious ideas from this fantasy. It was very interesting. good job
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It was nice to pick back up with this story. An interesting back story!!!!!!! Adds some context to the two people they are taking back to their homeland. I also liked the weaving in of religious ideas from this fantasy. It was very interesting. good job
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Comment Written 11-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2021
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Thank you so much, Theodore. I'm so glad you liked the back story and the religious part.