Weed Them Out
12 word poem30 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
The roots of bitterness do indeed need to be removed. Relationships are destroyed by this. Grief cannot be overcome. Well written with so few words and a great message.
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The roots of bitterness do indeed need to be removed. Relationships are destroyed by this. Grief cannot be overcome. Well written with so few words and a great message.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
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Thank you very much for dropping by and for the thoughtful comments
Comment from Brenda Henderson
Excellent 12 word poem that encompasses excellent instruction. Would that it were so simple. It is as long as we have the proper help and allow our hearts time and space to heal from the hurts. Well done!
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Excellent 12 word poem that encompasses excellent instruction. Would that it were so simple. It is as long as we have the proper help and allow our hearts time and space to heal from the hurts. Well done!
Comment Written 29-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
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Thank you very much for the thought provoking review
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You're Welcome!
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Fine work in 12 words! Clever alliteration in GR/GR and brilliant wordplay with ruinous/roots. Startling imagery is spot on for the theme. Hope to be back with congrats.
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Fine work in 12 words! Clever alliteration in GR/GR and brilliant wordplay with ruinous/roots. Startling imagery is spot on for the theme. Hope to be back with congrats.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
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Thank you very much for the lovely and encouraging comments.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a good job with your contest entry, Mystery Author. Your words are well thought out and your message is clear. All people need to understand the damage holding onto bitterness does to them. Your art choice works well. Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
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You did a good job with your contest entry, Mystery Author. Your words are well thought out and your message is clear. All people need to understand the damage holding onto bitterness does to them. Your art choice works well. Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 29-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
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Thank you very much for dropping by and reading this little-bit poem
Comment from equestrik
This is truth. I like this presentation with your nostalgic picture to go with your write. Bitterness does nothing but decay and destroy one's spirit. Good wriing.
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This is truth. I like this presentation with your nostalgic picture to go with your write. Bitterness does nothing but decay and destroy one's spirit. Good wriing.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2021
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Thank you very much .
Comment from kahpot
Yes we should weed out those who make us bitter or will grow to be part of us, very well written with wonderful message, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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Yes we should weed out those who make us bitter or will grow to be part of us, very well written with wonderful message, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 29-Jun-2021
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Thank you very much.
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are clear, strong, descriptive and creative. The first
two lines of this poem flow and connect well. The last line says it all!
The artwork is great and compliments these words. Great Poem!
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
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The author's words are clear, strong, descriptive and creative. The first
two lines of this poem flow and connect well. The last line says it all!
The artwork is great and compliments these words. Great Poem!
Comment Written 29-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
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Thank you very much for this lovely comment.
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello anon, you have written your twelve lines and given us wise words to ponder on. Written in 5/6/5 form and your third line which is very much like a satori is excellent. You led the reader astray with the picture LOL - clever. Good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x
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Hello anon, you have written your twelve lines and given us wise words to ponder on. Written in 5/6/5 form and your third line which is very much like a satori is excellent. You led the reader astray with the picture LOL - clever. Good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 29-Jun-2021
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Thank you very much for this beautiful comment.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Weeds have had bad press and here in England we have allowed some weeds a higher status in gardens, giving them a chance to shine, but here in your write they are uprooted, love Dolly x
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Weeds have had bad press and here in England we have allowed some weeds a higher status in gardens, giving them a chance to shine, but here in your write they are uprooted, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
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yes. I think dandelions are lovely plants. Here 'weed' is taken as harmful plants.. that perhaps retard the growth of planned garden.
Comment from Begin Again
The absolute truth in twelve words. If we continue to let grief, pain, hatred and desolation flourish in our garden, hope will be choked out and wither away.
Unfortunately, I could not see the chosen artwork to go with your poem.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
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The absolute truth in twelve words. If we continue to let grief, pain, hatred and desolation flourish in our garden, hope will be choked out and wither away.
Unfortunately, I could not see the chosen artwork to go with your poem.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 29-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
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True .but we see within the family people who nurse grudge... Thanks for dropping by and reading my little poem.
