The Chronicals Of Bethica: The Rise
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "The Chronicles Of Bethica"Abram must defeat a deadly humanoid race of beings
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Comment from Judy Lawless
This is a delightful chapter, Amahra. The dialogue is natural and you've managed to convey both the serious and humorous side (at at least in Gangus' imagination) of the ordeal that Brehira went through to save the ship's passengers and crew. Well done.
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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2021
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This is a delightful chapter, Amahra. The dialogue is natural and you've managed to convey both the serious and humorous side (at at least in Gangus' imagination) of the ordeal that Brehira went through to save the ship's passengers and crew. Well done.
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Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2021
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Thank you so much, Judy. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from royowen
Gangus finds out his dear wife had threatened to strip herself and threatened to use it to summon Gangus and his men, threatening the noble general with a compromising situation, but the bribe actually working, giving away a King's ransom on the process, but it worked, and she saved the princess in the process. Beautifully written Amahra. Well done, blessings Roy
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Gangus finds out his dear wife had threatened to strip herself and threatened to use it to summon Gangus and his men, threatening the noble general with a compromising situation, but the bribe actually working, giving away a King's ransom on the process, but it worked, and she saved the princess in the process. Beautifully written Amahra. Well done, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2021
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Thank you, Roy. I'm happy you stopped by.
Blessings
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Most welcome