Nomorrow
a 5-7-523 total reviews
Comment from Ginnygray
This frail greeting expresses sadness as "nomorrows " will be coming. The last day of life has arrived. Mournful and morose all expressed and enhanced by the grey format and artwork.
reply by the author on 09-May-2021
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This frail greeting expresses sadness as "nomorrows " will be coming. The last day of life has arrived. Mournful and morose all expressed and enhanced by the grey format and artwork.
Comment Written 09-May-2021
reply by the author on 09-May-2021
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Thanks, Ginnygray
Comment from Sherry Asbury
Outstanding write and in a short form...Your title is such a good choice!! My first thought was tornado, as they have been much in the news, but then your words gave expansion to my imagination and I "got it"... This is excellent writing and presentation!
reply by the author on 09-May-2021
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Outstanding write and in a short form...Your title is such a good choice!! My first thought was tornado, as they have been much in the news, but then your words gave expansion to my imagination and I "got it"... This is excellent writing and presentation!
Comment Written 09-May-2021
reply by the author on 09-May-2021
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Thank you, Sherry
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You are welcome!!
Comment from Patty Palmer
In this poem of death, the dark angel appears, the final day arrives. It reminds me of what is going on in our world today. Mostly about what is happening to our United States. Every day something new gets torn down and apart. When would we have ever thought that we would see our men in blue be target practice by thugs who think we should abolish the police forces in the whole country. Yeh, makes a lot of sense with the rioting and looting and murder rising every day. Our President, who is supposed to have all of our interests at heart, has thrown us under the bus within a matter of days and it keeps getting worse. It is a sad world when the running of our country is being based on tearing down every bit of good our President Trump did. It's all they are interested in. And this is what I feel your poem means to me. The greed for power will soon unplug the whole world on that final day.
Bill, your few words brought out this much meaning to me. It is the greed for power that will lead us to that final day!
Patty
reply by the author on 09-May-2021
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In this poem of death, the dark angel appears, the final day arrives. It reminds me of what is going on in our world today. Mostly about what is happening to our United States. Every day something new gets torn down and apart. When would we have ever thought that we would see our men in blue be target practice by thugs who think we should abolish the police forces in the whole country. Yeh, makes a lot of sense with the rioting and looting and murder rising every day. Our President, who is supposed to have all of our interests at heart, has thrown us under the bus within a matter of days and it keeps getting worse. It is a sad world when the running of our country is being based on tearing down every bit of good our President Trump did. It's all they are interested in. And this is what I feel your poem means to me. The greed for power will soon unplug the whole world on that final day.
Bill, your few words brought out this much meaning to me. It is the greed for power that will lead us to that final day!
Patty
Comment Written 09-May-2021
reply by the author on 09-May-2021
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We will certainly die by our own hand as many mighty nations have ended.
Comment from Ulla
Oh dear, this is certainly doom and gloom. A rather ominous 5-7-5 poem. Let's hope it's pure fiction. It's a great entry for the contest, though. It also goes well with the artwork. Good luck, Bill.
reply by the author on 09-May-2021
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Oh dear, this is certainly doom and gloom. A rather ominous 5-7-5 poem. Let's hope it's pure fiction. It's a great entry for the contest, though. It also goes well with the artwork. Good luck, Bill.
Comment Written 09-May-2021
reply by the author on 09-May-2021
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Thanks, Ulla
Comment from L. Kalere
I suppose we'll never truly know what death will look like, but you wrote a fine poem about a scenario. I like the use of subdued shades of grey and blacks to emphasize the somber tone. Well done.
Linda
reply by the author on 09-May-2021
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I suppose we'll never truly know what death will look like, but you wrote a fine poem about a scenario. I like the use of subdued shades of grey and blacks to emphasize the somber tone. Well done.
Linda
Comment Written 09-May-2021
reply by the author on 09-May-2021
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Thanks, Linda
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is an extremely complex 5-7-5 poem. It is incredible that you can get such a complicated message over clearly in only nine words. Well done and good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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This is an extremely complex 5-7-5 poem. It is incredible that you can get such a complicated message over clearly in only nine words. Well done and good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 08-May-2021
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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Thank you, Katherine
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This sounds like the end of the world and for some this situation has occurred as the virus has spread and taken so many lives, a poignant write Bill, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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This sounds like the end of the world and for some this situation has occurred as the virus has spread and taken so many lives, a poignant write Bill, love Dolly x
Comment Written 08-May-2021
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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Thank you, Dolly.
Comment from nomi338
Let me just tell you. If I ever look up into the sky and see something that looks like tis I will figure that the game has been call due to inclement weather. In other words, like 1999, party's over--oops out of time.
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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Let me just tell you. If I ever look up into the sky and see something that looks like tis I will figure that the game has been call due to inclement weather. In other words, like 1999, party's over--oops out of time.
Comment Written 08-May-2021
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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Hope you never see this then.
Comment from Dr. Nad
Nomorrow Is a lovely 5-7-5 contest entry that uses a beautiful picture to help signify death. Death is a subject that is seldom discussed. He reminded us in just a few words that there comes a time for each of us that there is no more tomorrow. Thanks for sharing. Embrace the love from above.
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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Nomorrow Is a lovely 5-7-5 contest entry that uses a beautiful picture to help signify death. Death is a subject that is seldom discussed. He reminded us in just a few words that there comes a time for each of us that there is no more tomorrow. Thanks for sharing. Embrace the love from above.
Comment Written 08-May-2021
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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Thank you, Doc
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You are most welcome Bill
Comment from lyenochka
That's a clever word, "Nomorrow" to show if there is such a worldwide disaster that takes out the world, there certainly would not be any more tomorrows. Well said in your 5-7-5.
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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That's a clever word, "Nomorrow" to show if there is such a worldwide disaster that takes out the world, there certainly would not be any more tomorrows. Well said in your 5-7-5.
Comment Written 08-May-2021
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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Thank you, lyenochka, for giving this a look.
