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Comment from lyenochka
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What a gracious way to put egg on someone's face! Thank you for sharing, Carol! I am so impressed with all that you are juggling even right after surgery! I hope you had help with the meal prep or was able to get some partly prepared in advance. Of course, you're a catering pro!

 Comment Written 02-May-2021


reply by the author on 02-May-2021
    I always prep in advance...especially since I have gotten older. Split it into two days... helps a lot. thanks for reading and yes, she deserved the egg on her face. Smiles, Carol
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
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You were fortunate to hear the inappropriate assumption, which gave you the advantage of the time to graciously insert the truth, where it was badly needed.
PS: I love Italian sausages.

Ralf

 Comment Written 02-May-2021


reply by the author on 02-May-2021
    Ralf, I was married to an Italian (the kid's dad) and all he would eat was Italian. Even used to make my own sauce... not anymore. Thanks for the review. Smiles, Carol
reply by Raffaelina Lowcock on 02-May-2021
    That would be monotonous.
Comment from royowen
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That must have brought you great satisfaction after the niggle you overheard, people criticise out of hand without thinking it out, although we need investors in project such as this, you'd think it would be be nice to have gracious ones, you lavished because you love your son. Well done, good onya. Blessings Roy

 Comment Written 02-May-2021


reply by the author on 02-May-2021
    I hate to admit it, Roy, but it did feel good. You'd think she'd have more sense then to gossip in hearing distance of anyone ... not knowing I was Matt's mom... But I made my point graciously and with much satisfaction. Smiles, Carol
reply by royowen on 02-May-2021
    Well done, you can be be my diplomat anyday
reply by the author on 02-May-2021
    Thank you, Roy... Smiles and a chuckle or two also
Comment from Anne Johnston
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You are a very busy person, and it sounds like you are well organized in what you do for your son. Providing a meal like that is a lot of work, but I am sure it was well appreciated. Sounds funny, celebrating New Years in May.

 Comment Written 02-May-2021


reply by the author on 02-May-2021
    Having owned my own catering business years ago, it comes like second nature. I love to be part of his dream. Smiles and hugs, Carol
reply by Anne Johnston on 02-May-2021
    glad you enjoy it
Comment from Anne Johnston
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You are a very busy person, and it sounds like you are well organized in what you do for your son. Providing a meal like that is a lot of work, but I am sure it was well appreciated. Sounds funny, celebrating New Years in May.

 Comment Written 02-May-2021


reply by the author on 02-May-2021
    Yes, especially when it was 83 and no snow... But it was written in the movie script so one does what needs to be done. LOL Smiles, Carol
Comment from Sally Law
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How do you do all this? My goodness, I wish I had half your energy and gracious spirit. I taught night school modeling and was a resident make up artist for Barbizon of Orlando for three years. Trust me, I've met them all. My most beautiful model lived in a shack with her parents and six brothers and sisters. Those who work hard and appreciate food and life are my kind of people! Thank you for sharing this, and congratulations once again!

Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs...

 Comment Written 02-May-2021


reply by the author on 02-May-2021
    Thanks, Sally.... Actually, lately, I think I just run on adrenaline, knowing I need to do things, help my son live his dream. Last night when I finally found my bed, I slept till early morning. something I haven't done in years so I believe my body said enough is enough. Today I am writing and cooking for 20... late night shoot. Just two days left and it will be a wrap. smiles and hugs - Carol
Comment from Susan Newell
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Oh, what a delicious moment that must have been. People are so quick to assume that someone has done them wrong, almost as if they expect it. You are indeed a busy and generous woman. I hope the shoot went well. I can't wait for Without Grace to be available on Amazon!

to help the wife cleanup -- I think when used as a verb it is clean up

Many but not all know me -- I'd add commas after many and all

 Comment Written 02-May-2021


reply by the author on 02-May-2021
    I fixed both... I too had commas around but not all of me, but Grammarly said to remove... can't trust anyone. LOL Thanks for the review. Smiles, Carol
reply by Susan Newell on 02-May-2021
    You are welcome. Sometimes artificial intelligence is pretty dumb. Then again, English is the most complex language.
Comment from equestrik
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I have not heard of this film but it sounds interesting-is it out to the public? It sounds like a very interesting job to cater to these people, I bet it was amazing.

 Comment Written 02-May-2021


reply by the author on 02-May-2021
    It's my son's second film. His first is going to be released on May 18th. It's his dream and I am so happy to see him following it. thanks for the kind review. Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
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I love it when big-mouthed know-it-all's assumptions are smothered in an omelet-crusted facial. Of course, now that you've made me so hungry I'm slobbering down my chin, it's time to visit the seafood buffet. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 02-May-2021


reply by the author on 02-May-2021
    Oh, seafood. A buffet, oh yeah! I want to come... How far is it? LOL
    I rarely eat when I make all that food, but seafood would entice me for sure. Thanks for stopping by again. Smiles and hugs - Carol
reply by Ric Myworld on 02-May-2021
    I'm in Cincinnati. I don't know how far away you are. But I do it every Sunday, or almost. LOL.
reply by the author on 02-May-2021
    I'm in Rockford, Illinois... it's 90 miles northwest of Chicago and sits about 30 miles south of the Wisconsin/Illinois border. You are a lucky man... every Sunday. I am so jealous. Smiles
reply by Ric Myworld on 02-May-2021
    I know where Rockford it. I used to stable and race horses in Chicago.
reply by the author on 02-May-2021
    Really...that sounds awesome. Most people have no idea.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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It's so nice of you to prepare a special meal for everybody. It was wonderful. Thank you for sharing this with us. I enjoyed reading. You did a great job writing this. I saw no problems.

 Comment Written 02-May-2021


reply by the author on 02-May-2021
    Barbara, It was my pleasure. It was work but I enjoy being involved with my son and his dream... and I enjoy cooking for others (not me so much). Glad you enjoyed! Smiles, Carol