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Comment from 4theloveoftrees
This is a great entry for the 20-word poem contest! The description of the stormy waters speaks so much of life...the storm comes and then peace settles in a while before the stormy waters rise again! Good luck!
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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This is a great entry for the 20-word poem contest! The description of the stormy waters speaks so much of life...the storm comes and then peace settles in a while before the stormy waters rise again! Good luck!
Comment Written 21-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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Dear 4theloveoftrees, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Dove, your art choice plus well-chosen words make a great contest entry. I enjoyed reading your poem. Your words flow smoothly, there's good use of alliteration with the letters, and your notes add more info.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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Dove, your art choice plus well-chosen words make a great contest entry. I enjoyed reading your poem. Your words flow smoothly, there's good use of alliteration with the letters, and your notes add more info.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
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Comment Written 21-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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Dear Jan, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Sally Law
Very nice and comforting. I love when the tide goes out and the waters have settled once more.
Sending you my very best today as always, and my best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal :))
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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2021
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Very nice and comforting. I love when the tide goes out and the waters have settled once more.
Sending you my very best today as always, and my best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal :))
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Comment Written 21-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2021
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Dear Sal, thank you for your comments and review. Dove