The Inn at Blackpool
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "The Nitwits Three"These are free-verse poems.
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Comment from Susan Newell
This is a very funny rhyming poem about three very, very bad boys. I really liked the way you made them Robbers, Bandits, Villain, etc. and "the house of Sweet Marie" is a very nice touch. Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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This is a very funny rhyming poem about three very, very bad boys. I really liked the way you made them Robbers, Bandits, Villain, etc. and "the house of Sweet Marie" is a very nice touch. Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 24-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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Thank you so very much......Godspeed and Good Luck going forward......
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You are very welcome.
Comment from equestrik
This is quite creative and clever and I think it is cool to be able to come up with this jingle. I do have to say, i felt kind of bad for these three who seem to be a bit daft.
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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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This is quite creative and clever and I think it is cool to be able to come up with this jingle. I do have to say, i felt kind of bad for these three who seem to be a bit daft.
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Comment Written 24-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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Daft?.....were they ever......Thanks so much....Godspeed and Good Luck in your writing....
