We Got Lucky
In Love...15 total reviews
Comment from Sugarray77
This is adorable, Sharon, and so perfect for the contest. I loved reading all of the clever ways you would show and share your love. A delightful entry for this prompt. Good luck.
Melissa
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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This is adorable, Sharon, and so perfect for the contest. I loved reading all of the clever ways you would show and share your love. A delightful entry for this prompt. Good luck.
Melissa
Comment Written 24-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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Thank you, that's very nice if you to say. Have a lovely day. :)
Comment from Susan Newell
This is a delightful poem about how a true lover gladly takes second spot and will always put the loved one first. I love all the ways you came up with the verses to express that, from coffee to hot air balloons. This could do very well in the contest. One small thing . . . birthday shouldn't be capitalized.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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This is a delightful poem about how a true lover gladly takes second spot and will always put the loved one first. I love all the ways you came up with the verses to express that, from coffee to hot air balloons. This could do very well in the contest. One small thing . . . birthday shouldn't be capitalized.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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Thank you for the correction. Punctuation and capitalization was never my strong suit. Thank you also for this great review. :)
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Debra White
Hello :)
This is a sweet poem, which tells of a strong and long lasting love.
I love that the focus is about putting each other first. That's how it should be for sure.
Well written with a sound rhyme scheme and presented really nicely.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes, Debra :)
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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Hello :)
This is a sweet poem, which tells of a strong and long lasting love.
I love that the focus is about putting each other first. That's how it should be for sure.
Well written with a sound rhyme scheme and presented really nicely.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment Written 24-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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Thank you so much, I'm always glad to hear from you. :)
Comment from Cycler
Sweet poem. You captured that sensation of love that occurs when two people adore each other, enjoy each other, and want to satisfy one another every moment of the day. Great tribute to your Love!
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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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Sweet poem. You captured that sensation of love that occurs when two people adore each other, enjoy each other, and want to satisfy one another every moment of the day. Great tribute to your Love!
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Comment Written 24-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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Thank you for this wonderful review. :)
Comment from Sharon Davis
A positive, upbeat, and light hearted affirmation of how true love can take hold and cause a person to become devoted to their soul mate. Love the reference to the couple's love being the only jackpot needed. Well done.
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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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A positive, upbeat, and light hearted affirmation of how true love can take hold and cause a person to become devoted to their soul mate. Love the reference to the couple's love being the only jackpot needed. Well done.
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Comment Written 24-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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Thank you for this great review, it's very appreciated. :)
