Center Stage
Spring will take...18 total reviews
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I like the photo that you choose that goes with your poem. they are a perfect match..
You captured my attention from the start
This is deep poem to read.
This is what i call a food for thought poem
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2021
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I like the photo that you choose that goes with your poem. they are a perfect match..
You captured my attention from the start
This is deep poem to read.
This is what i call a food for thought poem
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 06-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2021
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Thank you for this wonderful review, it's very appreciated. :)
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Your very welcome
Cookie
Comment from AnnaLinda
Poet,
You have done a fantabulous shop on using those specific 6 words for
the contest! I liked your use of the "marqee" (should be Marquee) and the
entire theater concept here in this great poem and entry. Very creative!
You chose the perfect art to accompany your poem as well. I also liked
your b/d rhymes throughout.
In the following line:
"It will last, but short a time,"
Did you mean...
'It will last, but a short time?.'
Well, this is an example of why I'm glad I did not enter the contest. Ha!
Looks like a winner.
Anna
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2021
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Poet,
You have done a fantabulous shop on using those specific 6 words for
the contest! I liked your use of the "marqee" (should be Marquee) and the
entire theater concept here in this great poem and entry. Very creative!
You chose the perfect art to accompany your poem as well. I also liked
your b/d rhymes throughout.
In the following line:
"It will last, but short a time,"
Did you mean...
'It will last, but a short time?.'
Well, this is an example of why I'm glad I did not enter the contest. Ha!
Looks like a winner.
Anna
Comment Written 05-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2021
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Thank you for this wonderful review, I'm so glad you like it. :)
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Welcome!
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hi Mystery Writer.
You did a good job of using all of the required words to complete your poem. It is a good metaphor comparing a new play opening to spring. Maybe this spring, people will even be allowed to go see a play.
(*z*)
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2021
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Hi Mystery Writer.
You did a good job of using all of the required words to complete your poem. It is a good metaphor comparing a new play opening to spring. Maybe this spring, people will even be allowed to go see a play.
(*z*)
Comment Written 05-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2021
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Thats what I'm waiting for. Thank you so much for this great review. :)
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You're welcome.
Comment from Anne Johnston
Your poem has successfully used the six words that were provided. And such a great idea, likening winter and spring to stage productions. Great rhyming and rhythm. Let's hope we can soon use our tickets.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2021
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Your poem has successfully used the six words that were provided. And such a great idea, likening winter and spring to stage productions. Great rhyming and rhythm. Let's hope we can soon use our tickets.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2021
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Thank you for this great review, I appreciate you taking time to read my poem. :)
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You are very welcome
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I like the idea of being on the front row of the theatre to see spring bloom and I am hoping I have bought my ticket for the show when it starts, a delightful read, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2021
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I like the idea of being on the front row of the theatre to see spring bloom and I am hoping I have bought my ticket for the show when it starts, a delightful read, love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2021
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Thank you for this nice review. I love going to stage shows, so this just came to me. Thanks again. :)
Comment from A Little Bird
Congratulations on this well-written piece. It's not Spring, but Autumn which has taken the stage here in Australia! But I'm grateful; as it's my favourite season. Good luck with the competition!
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2021
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Congratulations on this well-written piece. It's not Spring, but Autumn which has taken the stage here in Australia! But I'm grateful; as it's my favourite season. Good luck with the competition!
Comment Written 05-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2021
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That's my favorite too! I love the cooler air, the changing leaves and Halloween. Thanks so much for this great review and the six stars. :)
Comment from scarenavia
I Karen figured this spring thing had unlimited tickets. Springtime is the right time for the play. It look like its playing at select theaters near you. Come rain or come shine. Spring freshness is in the air. The more powerful she is.
The more odor permeates through the air. Like a cool breeze blowing fresh flowers from the garden
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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2021
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I Karen figured this spring thing had unlimited tickets. Springtime is the right time for the play. It look like its playing at select theaters near you. Come rain or come shine. Spring freshness is in the air. The more powerful she is.
The more odor permeates through the air. Like a cool breeze blowing fresh flowers from the garden
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Comment Written 05-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2021
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My thoughts exactly. Thank you for this nice poetic review, I really appreciate it. :)
Comment from L. Kalere
Not only did you do a great job with using the words in a poem, but it was seamless, not obvious... you didn't miss a beat. Now, the other thing: when I started reading I thought you had been looking over my shoulder. I am waiting for a good venue for a free verse with the same general theme. Ah, great minds think alike. I hope you do well in the contest.
Linda
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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2021
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Not only did you do a great job with using the words in a poem, but it was seamless, not obvious... you didn't miss a beat. Now, the other thing: when I started reading I thought you had been looking over my shoulder. I am waiting for a good venue for a free verse with the same general theme. Ah, great minds think alike. I hope you do well in the contest.
Linda
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Comment Written 04-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2021
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I read your mind of course! Hahahaha. Thank you for reading my poem, I really appreciate it. :).
