Football - A Novel
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "Football Chapter 9 part 1"A mother faces life's struggles.
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Comment from Ben Colder
I am into this move and ticked at the movers. So glad Hudson is turned the way he is toward the family. Love the character and now we see how things are really going to go.
Good one Barb.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021
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I am into this move and ticked at the movers. So glad Hudson is turned the way he is toward the family. Love the character and now we see how things are really going to go.
Good one Barb.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021
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Thank you for the kind review. Being a military spouse, I've moved often and many times by myself with the boys.
Comment from AJ McCall
Haha! Love the way the dialogue between these two! And the length is no problem for me, I love a good long chapter or story. Gabriel said, pretty... I'm sure Katherine was blushing. And the ending comment was hilarious. Those movers.... let's say I'd give them a piece of my mind if that happened. I'm sure my mom would. She demands good customer service because she gives good customer service. Gabriel is pushy but helpful. I can't wait to see what happened next!
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021
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Haha! Love the way the dialogue between these two! And the length is no problem for me, I love a good long chapter or story. Gabriel said, pretty... I'm sure Katherine was blushing. And the ending comment was hilarious. Those movers.... let's say I'd give them a piece of my mind if that happened. I'm sure my mom would. She demands good customer service because she gives good customer service. Gabriel is pushy but helpful. I can't wait to see what happened next!
Comment Written 03-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021
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Being a military spouse, I've moved often and many times by myself with four boys. Thank you for the kind review.
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Ah, so you write from experience. You're welcome!
Comment from robyn corum
Barb,
I don't know that I would be complaining about some of the stuff Gabe is doing for her. And he seems to have a sixth sense about when she'll need him. Crazy. Didn't understand what's going on yet with the cat.
Thanks!
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021
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Barb,
I don't know that I would be complaining about some of the stuff Gabe is doing for her. And he seems to have a sixth sense about when she'll need him. Crazy. Didn't understand what's going on yet with the cat.
Thanks!
Comment Written 03-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021
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Being a military spouse, I've moved often and many times by myself with the boys. The cat issue will be revealed, later. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from greyson ernst
nice job how do you know all this also nice picture its so very nice and as always keep writing and stay safe to you and yours have a happy happy 2021
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021
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nice job how do you know all this also nice picture its so very nice and as always keep writing and stay safe to you and yours have a happy happy 2021
Comment Written 03-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear barbara, I am sort of glad that the moving men left our heroine in a fix, Because it allowed our hero to step in, and prove himself to be the father you intended. And as required you have, to have a jerk and fraud like Mr. Holland, just to add a little drama. P.S. Dogs, even if they intend to kill a cat, would never grab it around the middle. Their jaws are not large enough. I hope the new officer is smart enough to figure that one out.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021
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Dear barbara, I am sort of glad that the moving men left our heroine in a fix, Because it allowed our hero to step in, and prove himself to be the father you intended. And as required you have, to have a jerk and fraud like Mr. Holland, just to add a little drama. P.S. Dogs, even if they intend to kill a cat, would never grab it around the middle. Their jaws are not large enough. I hope the new officer is smart enough to figure that one out.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021
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The cat issue will be revealed, later. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Well, lets hope they beat the rain, and a stop on the check to the movers would be in order. Then, let the lawyers negotiate how much should come off the bill for not completing the contract. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021
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Well, lets hope they beat the rain, and a stop on the check to the movers would be in order. Then, let the lawyers negotiate how much should come off the bill for not completing the contract. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021
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The cat issue will be revealed, later. Thank you for the kind review. I am sure Katherine paid in advance. Being a military spouse, I've made moves many times by myself and with four boys. Army husbands are never home when you need them. LOL
Comment from lancellot
This is could be the script to a Lifetime movie. I can actually picture the scenes in my head. Right down to coach's five o'clock shadow and the dogs wagging tail.
In all seriousness, this is well written and edited. Great job, it shows you put in the time and effort needed.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021
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This is could be the script to a Lifetime movie. I can actually picture the scenes in my head. Right down to coach's five o'clock shadow and the dogs wagging tail.
In all seriousness, this is well written and edited. Great job, it shows you put in the time and effort needed.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021
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I actually feel many of my stories could qualify for Hallmark. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Grrr, men like that make me so mad! They are lazy, weak, and without honour or principles!! I'm glad Gabriel has got it sorted. But that company needs to be sued for breaking their end of the contract. Now, what's all this about a big black dog, killing a cat?? Another excellent part. :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2021
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Grrr, men like that make me so mad! They are lazy, weak, and without honour or principles!! I'm glad Gabriel has got it sorted. But that company needs to be sued for breaking their end of the contract. Now, what's all this about a big black dog, killing a cat?? Another excellent part. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 03-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2021
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Thank you for the kind review. With my husband being military, I've had to move a few times by myself when he was deployed. Not at all good. I am not sure about this dog and cat.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Barb,
You did well having many activities going on in your
Chapter 9 part 1. Which I found really good of how you kept us readers trying to figure IF the dog killed the cat.
Smiles great dialogue throughout this chapter.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2021
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Barb,
You did well having many activities going on in your
Chapter 9 part 1. Which I found really good of how you kept us readers trying to figure IF the dog killed the cat.
Smiles great dialogue throughout this chapter.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2021
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I'm wondering about that cat myself. Thank you for the kind review.
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You are welcome Barb
Comment from Ulla
Hi Barbara, another well written chapter with a lot of dialogue. Also a good bit of confusion about the dog killing the cat, and the removers making a mess of it all. Looking forward to what's next. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2021
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Hi Barbara, another well written chapter with a lot of dialogue. Also a good bit of confusion about the dog killing the cat, and the removers making a mess of it all. Looking forward to what's next. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 03-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2021
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Thank you for the kind review.