Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
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Comment from roof35
This is a lovely free verse poem for the contest "What is Love." You list many things that are absolutely true about love. I think you may have a typo that you might want to fix if you agree. Your very last line, "Love is all off this and this and more." Suspect you meant all OF this. Anyway, this is nicely done and I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
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This is a lovely free verse poem for the contest "What is Love." You list many things that are absolutely true about love. I think you may have a typo that you might want to fix if you agree. Your very last line, "Love is all off this and this and more." Suspect you meant all OF this. Anyway, this is nicely done and I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
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Your are so kind to alert me to the double f.. thank you !
Comment from June Sargent
Love is the strongest foundation - a bond that anchors a relationship. It can survive all the storms life brings - like brick and mortar. I like the positivity of this piece - so many poems are based on the pain love can bring. This one highlights the joys. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
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Love is the strongest foundation - a bond that anchors a relationship. It can survive all the storms life brings - like brick and mortar. I like the positivity of this piece - so many poems are based on the pain love can bring. This one highlights the joys. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
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June, thank you very much!
Comment from Taurus the Elder
Very good. Your right, the different kinds of love cover everything you spoke about in your work. Technically sound, good free form, strong ending, and its supported by beautiful art work. Great job, good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
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Very good. Your right, the different kinds of love cover everything you spoke about in your work. Technically sound, good free form, strong ending, and its supported by beautiful art work. Great job, good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
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Thank you sir!
Comment from Bloomer Burbs
Hi mystery writer
Well ,you certainly fulfil the criteria of this competition, which is a poem on love. Funny how we all have an individual idea of what love is.
Heart, mind and soul from the
Tether of LOVE.
just a thought, in the above line I would swap, tether with harness. Only a thought.
Take care and stay safe, Pete
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
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Hi mystery writer
Well ,you certainly fulfil the criteria of this competition, which is a poem on love. Funny how we all have an individual idea of what love is.
Heart, mind and soul from the
Tether of LOVE.
just a thought, in the above line I would swap, tether with harness. Only a thought.
Take care and stay safe, Pete
Comment Written 13-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
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Bloomer burbs, perhaps you are so correct, I will try it on. Thank you.,
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the essence of love is more than just physical contact. Everyone involved in a love relationship have to be selfless and give more of themselves than receiving from another.
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A very well-written poem about the essence of love is more than just physical contact. Everyone involved in a love relationship have to be selfless and give more of themselves than receiving from another.
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Comment Written 13-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from Eternal Muse
I liked your interpretation of Love. Excellent entry for the contest. Great imagery and visuals and I loved your presentation and artwork.
Good luck in the contest and, happy holidays!
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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
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I liked your interpretation of Love. Excellent entry for the contest. Great imagery and visuals and I loved your presentation and artwork.
Good luck in the contest and, happy holidays!
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Comment Written 13-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
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Thank you for the good wishes and happiest of holidays to you as well.
