My Big Green Friend
quatrains in rhyming couplets182 total reviews
Comment from Leineco
!!!!! Not only is it a "best ever" expression ---it's flat out adorable!
And the poem is also a delight. It has a flow and beat that captivates
the reader - not to mention a really cute story! I can just picture Sawyer
being charmed by this big green ogre, frightened by bubblegum popping
and shouting "Don't be afraid"...."Come on...let's have some fun." Feeling
all grown up with superior bravery glowing :-)
Very nice!
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!!!!! Not only is it a "best ever" expression ---it's flat out adorable!
And the poem is also a delight. It has a flow and beat that captivates
the reader - not to mention a really cute story! I can just picture Sawyer
being charmed by this big green ogre, frightened by bubblegum popping
and shouting "Don't be afraid"...."Come on...let's have some fun." Feeling
all grown up with superior bravery glowing :-)
Very nice!
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
Comment from Matthew M.
I found this poem to be super cute. Can you believe a great big monster being afraid of a bubble blown from his own gum? That's funny. A totally enjoyable poem.
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I found this poem to be super cute. Can you believe a great big monster being afraid of a bubble blown from his own gum? That's funny. A totally enjoyable poem.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
Comment from Terror2s
Sawyer never fails to inspire you. This reminded me of when my own son was young and was scared of characters. Thanks for sharing. T2
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Sawyer never fails to inspire you. This reminded me of when my own son was young and was scared of characters. Thanks for sharing. T2
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
Comment from CR Delport
What a cute and well written poem, but I am sure to say. The expression on the cute little guy's face out does your poem :). Thanks for sharing.
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What a cute and well written poem, but I am sure to say. The expression on the cute little guy's face out does your poem :). Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
Comment from NightWriter
My Big Green Friend is another one of your outstanding poems. Perfect rhythm and rhyme throughout. I love that expression. How lucky to capture that rarest of moments. Bravo!
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My Big Green Friend is another one of your outstanding poems. Perfect rhythm and rhyme throughout. I love that expression. How lucky to capture that rarest of moments. Bravo!
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
Comment from Curly Girly
This is a truly delightful poem to read and to enjoy. It reads at a jaunty pace and the rhymes are simply perfect. It could be a children's story.
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This is a truly delightful poem to read and to enjoy. It reads at a jaunty pace and the rhymes are simply perfect. It could be a children's story.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
Comment from SteveY
Sounds like you've just described the Christmas grinch! An excellent little story in poem form to share with all the little people of the world.
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Sounds like you've just described the Christmas grinch! An excellent little story in poem form to share with all the little people of the world.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
Comment from mfowler
I like your lovely poem. As a teacher o f young kids I know that this would be a hit. The regular rhyme and imaginative theme make it an attractive package.
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I like your lovely poem. As a teacher o f young kids I know that this would be a hit. The regular rhyme and imaginative theme make it an attractive package.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
Comment from lancellot
Another great piece and it was funny yet light hearted. I wanted this line to be:
but just as things were looking glum,
I saw the creature chewing gum!
- what if it read: chewing bubble Gum
What you have is excellent either way.
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Another great piece and it was funny yet light hearted. I wanted this line to be:
but just as things were looking glum,
I saw the creature chewing gum!
- what if it read: chewing bubble Gum
What you have is excellent either way.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
Comment from ILovePoetry!
Wow! This is absolutely adorable! I love friendly little monsters (or not so little)! Brilliant portrayal of the green monster and I love the use of the chewing gum to add a little friendliness to this lovable monster! Brilliant work!
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Wow! This is absolutely adorable! I love friendly little monsters (or not so little)! Brilliant portrayal of the green monster and I love the use of the chewing gum to add a little friendliness to this lovable monster! Brilliant work!
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
