My Big Green Friend
quatrains in rhyming couplets182 total reviews
Comment from Sueellen11
This s lovely, what a great story in poetic form, great children's poem, well deserving of being chosen for the home page, i enjoyed it o much, blessings sueellen
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This s lovely, what a great story in poetic form, great children's poem, well deserving of being chosen for the home page, i enjoyed it o much, blessings sueellen
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
Comment from Liz Dunbee
I thought this was such fun. I love the creature, whatever he is, he is great! The photo is very sweet and I think your words suit the picture.
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I thought this was such fun. I love the creature, whatever he is, he is great! The photo is very sweet and I think your words suit the picture.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
Comment from Titanx9
We should all have such a big green friend who will be there through he good and the bad. I like this story, because is shows that everything that looks bad, does not always translate to evil. I like this photo. It's the picture of love. Great job!
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We should all have such a big green friend who will be there through he good and the bad. I like this story, because is shows that everything that looks bad, does not always translate to evil. I like this photo. It's the picture of love. Great job!
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
Comment from krys123
A very beautiful and chanting poem for children. Especially if you are chewing bubblegum when you are reading this poem and acting and the big green monster was really just a wee bit of a scaredy-cat. You managed to temper the poem just well enough to make it just perfect for a child. The tempo and rhythm makes it very easy for the child to understand let alone being very easy to read. Thank you for sharing this adewpearl with all of us. You have a good one and God bless.
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A very beautiful and chanting poem for children. Especially if you are chewing bubblegum when you are reading this poem and acting and the big green monster was really just a wee bit of a scaredy-cat. You managed to temper the poem just well enough to make it just perfect for a child. The tempo and rhythm makes it very easy for the child to understand let alone being very easy to read. Thank you for sharing this adewpearl with all of us. You have a good one and God bless.
AK
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
What a delightful tale.
A gentle giant indeed.
Perfect rhymed couplets which flow well to present a tale destined to delight children.
Isn't it always the way that the biggest physically tends to be the weakest emotionally.
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What a delightful tale.
A gentle giant indeed.
Perfect rhymed couplets which flow well to present a tale destined to delight children.
Isn't it always the way that the biggest physically tends to be the weakest emotionally.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
Comment from cinderbella
Have to give you a six for this, the poem is great, but I have to say Sawyer is becoming quite the model... He is gorgeous. The poem was funny, fast-paced, great rhythm all the way through. You are amazingly talented. :) Sandra
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Have to give you a six for this, the poem is great, but I have to say Sawyer is becoming quite the model... He is gorgeous. The poem was funny, fast-paced, great rhythm all the way through. You are amazingly talented. :) Sandra
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
Comment from tbacha58
As usual the adorable young handsome guy, inspires your amazing imagination to come up with a beautiful
green poem.
Bless him and you Terry.
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As usual the adorable young handsome guy, inspires your amazing imagination to come up with a beautiful
green poem.
Bless him and you Terry.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
Comment from kra-z-ka-z
This is a real tickler Brooke! I'll bet Sesame Street would buy this! Their probably ready for a new kid on the block, and This guy is just what Ernie was wishing for! Oscar would love him too - until he found out how shy the guy is...
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This is a real tickler Brooke! I'll bet Sesame Street would buy this! Their probably ready for a new kid on the block, and This guy is just what Ernie was wishing for! Oscar would love him too - until he found out how shy the guy is...
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
Comment from ravenblack
So now you are channelling Maurice Sendak. Does your wit for children's lit ever end? ( I hope not). Couldn't help but think of Sawyer as a calmer, gentler Max and the creature a gum-chewing denizen from Where The Wild Things Are. Does Sawyer' s name have anything to do with Twain?
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So now you are channelling Maurice Sendak. Does your wit for children's lit ever end? ( I hope not). Couldn't help but think of Sawyer as a calmer, gentler Max and the creature a gum-chewing denizen from Where The Wild Things Are. Does Sawyer' s name have anything to do with Twain?
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
Too cute, now I have to be professional....:-) Great alliteration, wonderful rhyming couplets in perfect quatrains, making for a well penned, hilarious and ...and..that is how we came to be, the best of friends you'll ever see. Oh well Brooke, I really, really liked this one. Sawyers expression is priceless! :-) Carolyn
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Too cute, now I have to be professional....:-) Great alliteration, wonderful rhyming couplets in perfect quatrains, making for a well penned, hilarious and ...and..that is how we came to be, the best of friends you'll ever see. Oh well Brooke, I really, really liked this one. Sawyers expression is priceless! :-) Carolyn
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
