My Big Green Friend
quatrains in rhyming couplets182 total reviews
Comment from Lulube
another great childrens story for a book. Easy flowing read and again terrific rhyming. Cut story, great for the imagination to build on, so book?
Sawyers look? I tend to agree.
lulube
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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another great childrens story for a book. Easy flowing read and again terrific rhyming. Cut story, great for the imagination to build on, so book?
Sawyers look? I tend to agree.
lulube
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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Lulube, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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your welcome Brooke
lulube
Comment from rjuselius
such a cute and sweet poem! i bet you tell Sawyer tales from far away and silly little things you can come up with. my dad told us stories and my mother read books. i can only remember only the stories.
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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such a cute and sweet poem! i bet you tell Sawyer tales from far away and silly little things you can come up with. my dad told us stories and my mother read books. i can only remember only the stories.
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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Rebekka, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from jmdg1954
That expression is worth a million dollars as my mother would say!
I liked your children's poem. It rhymed well and told a clear, concise story with a happy ending.
Great photo... Nicely done Brooke , John
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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That expression is worth a million dollars as my mother would say!
I liked your children's poem. It rhymed well and told a clear, concise story with a happy ending.
Great photo... Nicely done Brooke , John
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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John, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Bill Schott
This is another terrific poem that reads kind of like how you'd want a happy dream to go. The creature is discovered to be harmless and friendly. Nice image and fun to read.
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This is another terrific poem that reads kind of like how you'd want a happy dream to go. The creature is discovered to be harmless and friendly. Nice image and fun to read.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
Comment from Melspoems
Great fun poem Brooke, with a nice story/moral to it.
Brilliant rhythm and rhymes.
And of course Sawyer looks awesome as always.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2013
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Great fun poem Brooke, with a nice story/moral to it.
Brilliant rhythm and rhymes.
And of course Sawyer looks awesome as always.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2013
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Mel, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Domino 2
Very cute kids write, Brooke.
Excellent enjambment throughout plus your usual top meter and rhymes.
Original theme of the 'monster' (could have been Dad I suspect) and his bubble-blowing escapades.
Lots of fun here.
Cheers, Ted
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2013
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Very cute kids write, Brooke.
Excellent enjambment throughout plus your usual top meter and rhymes.
Original theme of the 'monster' (could have been Dad I suspect) and his bubble-blowing escapades.
Lots of fun here.
Cheers, Ted
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2013
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Ted, thank you so much :-) Glad you enjoyed. Brooke
Comment from Aussie
Looks like his eyes are going to pop right out - wonder what attracted his attention? I enjoyed your AABB quatrain. A bubble blowing dragon - that's different. Maybe dragon had a cold. One day Sawyer will sit down and read Nana's poems about his early childhood. Think you better copyright these special poems. Well done Mrs. Flame
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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Looks like his eyes are going to pop right out - wonder what attracted his attention? I enjoyed your AABB quatrain. A bubble blowing dragon - that's different. Maybe dragon had a cold. One day Sawyer will sit down and read Nana's poems about his early childhood. Think you better copyright these special poems. Well done Mrs. Flame
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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Kay, thank you so much, my friend :-) I have no idea what he is reacting to in this picture - I have to ask Miranda if she remembers. :-) Brooke
Comment from Righteous Riter
The writer stays consistent with the aabb rhyme scheme. The writer delivers a message that is clear, to the point and makes the reader smile. I see nothing out of place or anything that needs adjusting. Good job.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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The writer stays consistent with the aabb rhyme scheme. The writer delivers a message that is clear, to the point and makes the reader smile. I see nothing out of place or anything that needs adjusting. Good job.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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Righteous Riter, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from denhagan
This was a nice poem, written in the quatrain style with rhyming couplets, with great rhythm and rhyming throughout the poem. Read easily and flowed smoothly.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2013
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This was a nice poem, written in the quatrain style with rhyming couplets, with great rhythm and rhyming throughout the poem. Read easily and flowed smoothly.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2013
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Den, thanks so much :-) Brooke
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You're welcome Brooke, :)
Dennis
Comment from michaelcahill
I am enjoying these immensely. however, I take children's poetry to the streets whenever possible and get reviews from the real test market. I would like you to know that you are a big hit in the neighborhood and I am a minor hit as a speaking minstrel of sorts. they are brutally honest and surprise me often in their likes and dislikes. there are many works I find clever that bore them. never one of yours though. thought you would like to know. mike
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I am enjoying these immensely. however, I take children's poetry to the streets whenever possible and get reviews from the real test market. I would like you to know that you are a big hit in the neighborhood and I am a minor hit as a speaking minstrel of sorts. they are brutally honest and surprise me often in their likes and dislikes. there are many works I find clever that bore them. never one of yours though. thought you would like to know. mike
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
