CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from honeytree
Child
Silent
Autism
Misunderstood
How can we comprehend her different world?
Through love and care and warmth
tenderness, understanding, patience and being, playful
This child needs love, a caring hand for warmth, tenderness and understanding be playful and patient with this child.
A child like this can gain confidence with this input.
I loved your words and art work.
Honeytree.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2008
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Child
Silent
Autism
Misunderstood
How can we comprehend her different world?
Through love and care and warmth
tenderness, understanding, patience and being, playful
This child needs love, a caring hand for warmth, tenderness and understanding be playful and patient with this child.
A child like this can gain confidence with this input.
I loved your words and art work.
Honeytree.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2008
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Honeytree, Thank you very much for your very kind words and most generous review. Your warm comments are so much appreciate. Best regards, Sue
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I am glad you likedthe review.All the best. Honeytree.
Comment from Sheepmama
Future potential is what comes off the top of my head. I understand her message, but it didn't stick to me. Not bad for a first try.
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Future potential is what comes off the top of my head. I understand her message, but it didn't stick to me. Not bad for a first try.
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Comment Written 24-Nov-2008
Comment from dportwood
Sixteezkid,
The tetractys style of poetry has 5 lines of 1, 2, 3, 4, and 10 syllables.
It appears to me that your poem has 1, 2, 2, 4, and 10 syllables. 'withdrawn' has only 2 syllables.
But I like the poem and the truth it represents.
Duane
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2008
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Sixteezkid,
The tetractys style of poetry has 5 lines of 1, 2, 3, 4, and 10 syllables.
It appears to me that your poem has 1, 2, 2, 4, and 10 syllables. 'withdrawn' has only 2 syllables.
But I like the poem and the truth it represents.
Duane
Comment Written 24-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2008
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Duane......I'm now running as fast as I can to the edit room! Ha!!! Thank you SO MUCH!!! Your review is MOST generous. It will be more deserved when I correct! Warmest regards, Sue
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A few changes for the technical and the flow.
Comment from skye
Short, succinct, powerful. How can we truly understand what goes on inside another person unless we use our love and patience to really get to know them, to offer them our unconditional love.
Well done.
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Short, succinct, powerful. How can we truly understand what goes on inside another person unless we use our love and patience to really get to know them, to offer them our unconditional love.
Well done.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2008
Comment from Adam Smith
This makes a very interesting point in regards to the issue of understanding the problem of autism. It's hard to understand anything from the outside, but in this case, it is likely impossible to come to understand it from the inside. So we are fighting an uphill battle, but I think, winning. This is a terrific poem and I think it brings to light the issue of autism and I for one am more curious and will likely do a little research to see exactly how your poem fits the reality. It's quite a paradox that you present and I'm intrigued. Thanks for the interesting read. Adam
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This makes a very interesting point in regards to the issue of understanding the problem of autism. It's hard to understand anything from the outside, but in this case, it is likely impossible to come to understand it from the inside. So we are fighting an uphill battle, but I think, winning. This is a terrific poem and I think it brings to light the issue of autism and I for one am more curious and will likely do a little research to see exactly how your poem fits the reality. It's quite a paradox that you present and I'm intrigued. Thanks for the interesting read. Adam
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Comment Written 24-Nov-2008