CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 150 "Peace, Sweet Peace"A collection of poetry
109 total reviews
Comment from Trena One Who Cares
Hi Kid I long for the day I can have some of that peace you write about. Good rhythm and flow used throughout this well written piece. Nicely done. Trena
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2008
  |
Hi Kid I long for the day I can have some of that peace you write about. Good rhythm and flow used throughout this well written piece. Nicely done. Trena
Comment Written 17-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2008
-
Trena, yes....why is it so 'fleeting'?.....Thank you so much for your review and comments. Very much appreciated.....Sue
Comment from rmdelta
6teezkid.
Wow, the picture perfectly goes with your wonderful poem. Well written,wonderful stanzas seem meant to follow one another. So descriptie in wording and sending a powerful message. Great work and thanks for sharing.
Reggie
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2008
|
6teezkid.
Wow, the picture perfectly goes with your wonderful poem. Well written,wonderful stanzas seem meant to follow one another. So descriptie in wording and sending a powerful message. Great work and thanks for sharing.
Reggie
Comment Written 17-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2008
-
Reggie, I am so glad you enjoyed my poem! And thank you very much for your review. Glad you commented on the photo, also. It can be tough to put an image with your words. I really appreciate your comments........Sue
Comment from Rar22
I really enjoyed this piece. I love how you approach the concept of peace from many different, sensual angles: sight, taste, touch. The first stanza is very true. Great work.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2008
|
I really enjoyed this piece. I love how you approach the concept of peace from many different, sensual angles: sight, taste, touch. The first stanza is very true. Great work.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2008
-
I'm so glad you liked my poem. Thank you very much for your review and comments! Much appreciated.......Sue
Comment from peggysis64
Peace, Sweet Peace, take me away from all the stress and pressure in this ugly, hectic life of mine.
Well written, painting a picture that has the power to carry me away from it all. Well written with vivid imagery and a strong descriptive scheme leading to a smooth and enjoyable read. kay
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2008
|
Peace, Sweet Peace, take me away from all the stress and pressure in this ugly, hectic life of mine.
Well written, painting a picture that has the power to carry me away from it all. Well written with vivid imagery and a strong descriptive scheme leading to a smooth and enjoyable read. kay
Comment Written 17-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2008
-
Kay, I am so glad you enjoyed my poem. Thank you so much for your review and comments. Much appreciated.......Sue
Comment from bard owl
There is so much stress in life today, you poem speaks for us all in the yearning for peace and contentment. Excellent, comforting imagery in the lovely poem. Blessings to you, Linda
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2008
|
There is so much stress in life today, you poem speaks for us all in the yearning for peace and contentment. Excellent, comforting imagery in the lovely poem. Blessings to you, Linda
Comment Written 17-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2008
-
Linda...thank you so much for your review and lovely comments. So glad you like it! Very much appreciated.......Sue
Comment from RossJM
A beautiful, short break from life's hectic ways.
I like this subheading of yours.
The piece itself is also quite nice aand peacefull.
Piece about Peace. Ha-ha.
Well done.
Cheers,
Ross
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2008
|
A beautiful, short break from life's hectic ways.
I like this subheading of yours.
The piece itself is also quite nice aand peacefull.
Piece about Peace. Ha-ha.
Well done.
Cheers,
Ross
Comment Written 17-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2008
-
Ross, thank you so much for your very kind review and your comments. Very much appreciated!.......Sue
Comment from J. Wrangler
Escapism is alive and well in your poetry. The lines have a soothing quality. I'm almost an insomniac and perhaps I will try getting to sleep tonight while chanting this poem.
A sweet and calming short poem.
J
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2008
 |
Escapism is alive and well in your poetry. The lines have a soothing quality. I'm almost an insomniac and perhaps I will try getting to sleep tonight while chanting this poem.
A sweet and calming short poem.
J
Comment Written 17-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2008
-
J....thanks so much for your awesome review and your comments. Hoping you get a good night's sleep!! So glad you liked it....very much appreciated......Sue
Comment from Judian James
Welcome to FanStory. I read this more than once, as I wasn't sure whether I liked the repetition or not. I'm still not sure but I didn't dislike it either. I think I'd like the opportunity to read the piece in its brevity with Peace, sweet peace every fourth line. With that being said, I thought it had a wonderful visual and sensory feel to it. well done I think I would try this with the second and third verses without the starting, repetitive line. Just a thought
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2008
|
Welcome to FanStory. I read this more than once, as I wasn't sure whether I liked the repetition or not. I'm still not sure but I didn't dislike it either. I think I'd like the opportunity to read the piece in its brevity with Peace, sweet peace every fourth line. With that being said, I thought it had a wonderful visual and sensory feel to it. well done I think I would try this with the second and third verses without the starting, repetitive line. Just a thought
Comment Written 17-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2008
-
Julian, I really appreciate your review and your specific comments. Love hearing this kind of critique....very much appreciated.....Sue
-
Hi. I actually messed up a bit as I meant to say "without" when I said "with". I think the piece would have more power if the second and third verses did not have the first line. Just try it and see what you think
-
Hi. I actually messed up a bit as I meant to say "without" when I said "with". I think the piece would have more power if the second and third verses did not have the first line. Just try it and see what you think
-
Hi. I actually messed up a bit as I meant to say "without" when I said "with". I think the piece would have more power if the second and third verses did not have the first line. Just try it and see what you think
-
I've thought and thought about it.......your suggestion is very valid and worth my evaluation.
Comment from sara-beth
This is a lovely piece, no pun intended.....very beautiful imagery, and a lot of emotion. We all search for such moments, and we must relish them when they are upon us, for we know not whence they shall return....
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2008
|
This is a lovely piece, no pun intended.....very beautiful imagery, and a lot of emotion. We all search for such moments, and we must relish them when they are upon us, for we know not whence they shall return....
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2008
-
I want to thank you for your review and lovely comments. I'm very glad you enjoyed my poem! ....Sue