Little Billy
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "The Devils Seed"memiors from my life experiences.
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Comment from Cedar
This is great piece and I enjoyed reading it. You
certainly describe temptation perfectly. It's some-
thing that I believe is the devils favorite tool.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2010
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This is great piece and I enjoyed reading it. You
certainly describe temptation perfectly. It's some-
thing that I believe is the devils favorite tool.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2010
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thanks for the kind review
Comment from wvfreespirit
Nice flow. And the topic is one that many can relate to whether or not they are willing to admit it. But as one who has sampled forbidden fruits I can say not giving in to temptation is easier said than done. Well done.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2010
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Nice flow. And the topic is one that many can relate to whether or not they are willing to admit it. But as one who has sampled forbidden fruits I can say not giving in to temptation is easier said than done. Well done.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2010
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thank you
Comment from rosah
beautiful poem about temptation, and, as you said , i'm sure that anyone who has ever been drawn, will identify with this, especially like the line about moses! lovely artwork, thank you for sharing, go with love!
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beautiful poem about temptation, and, as you said , i'm sure that anyone who has ever been drawn, will identify with this, especially like the line about moses! lovely artwork, thank you for sharing, go with love!
Comment Written 18-Sep-2010
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thank you
Comment from c_lucas
It is far easier to get forgiveness than to get permission. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, Good luck in your contest.
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It is far easier to get forgiveness than to get permission. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, Good luck in your contest.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2010
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thank you
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You're welcome.
Comment from Fireshadow
keimosobe, this is a great entry for the Temptation Poetry contest and will surely be a strong contender in the competition. Good luck in the contest, my friend.
Amarillys
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keimosobe, this is a great entry for the Temptation Poetry contest and will surely be a strong contender in the competition. Good luck in the contest, my friend.
Amarillys
Comment Written 18-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2010
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I'm not in the contest but thanks for the vote. I did steel the writing prompt though.
Comment from RKagan
This is a very intense and riviting poem. It's written well. I like your writing style. Although this is a little scary, it is true! The art work is perfect. good job
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This is a very intense and riviting poem. It's written well. I like your writing style. Although this is a little scary, it is true! The art work is perfect. good job
Comment Written 18-Sep-2010
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i think it true. Thanks for the review
Comment from Kingsland
This poem has a very good flow to its thoughts and phrases. I liked the message here as well. This was just a delight to have read and written a review for... John
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This poem has a very good flow to its thoughts and phrases. I liked the message here as well. This was just a delight to have read and written a review for... John
Comment Written 18-Sep-2010
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thanks john i appriciate the review and the stars.
Comment from Justa Begina
Hi there Keimo, you certainly have a gift when writing from the heart. Your poem is so descriptive, it brings to life the meaning of temptation and the devils part in promoting it. Your phrases flow smoothly and your rhyme has been used so accurately. I ,like many others, have succumbed to this forbidden place and although at the time it was pure heaven, once the thrill or novelty has worn off then regret kicks in. Very well presented, an absolute pleasure to read !
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2010
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Hi there Keimo, you certainly have a gift when writing from the heart. Your poem is so descriptive, it brings to life the meaning of temptation and the devils part in promoting it. Your phrases flow smoothly and your rhyme has been used so accurately. I ,like many others, have succumbed to this forbidden place and although at the time it was pure heaven, once the thrill or novelty has worn off then regret kicks in. Very well presented, an absolute pleasure to read !
Comment Written 18-Sep-2010
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thank you
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thank you
Comment from Sarah_Goldwell
This is a very nice little poem. It is well written and well presented. It rhymes well and the flow is good. The message it delivers is strong and clear, a very enjoyable read.
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This is a very nice little poem. It is well written and well presented. It rhymes well and the flow is good. The message it delivers is strong and clear, a very enjoyable read.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2010
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thank you
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thank you
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Like how this one flows down the page ...writing has heat to it and great visual imagery with your specific use of words. Like how it is presented as well. Good job. xoxo Kiwi
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Like how this one flows down the page ...writing has heat to it and great visual imagery with your specific use of words. Like how it is presented as well. Good job. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 18-Sep-2010
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thank you
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thank you