CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from Nightwind1
Divorce is never a pretty thing. It is usually the children that get hurt the most. They are left wondering what THEY did worng. The poem flowed well and had the darkness you set out to achieve.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2008
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Divorce is never a pretty thing. It is usually the children that get hurt the most. They are left wondering what THEY did worng. The poem flowed well and had the darkness you set out to achieve.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2008
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Thank you so much for your generous review and specific comments. The divorce has been awhile ago and it is with time one can see the great healing. With warmest regards, Sue
Comment from electroswiftword
After reading your notes this poem really took on new meaning. You have crafted in a very artistic and unique way. It is something to be read and remembered. You should feel a lot of joy from this accomplishment.
Will
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2008
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After reading your notes this poem really took on new meaning. You have crafted in a very artistic and unique way. It is something to be read and remembered. You should feel a lot of joy from this accomplishment.
Will
Comment Written 20-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2008
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Will, I only just posted this and must say I had absolutely no idea how it would be viewed, as it is most certainly not a pleasant subject matter (especially after my "sweet" innocent last 3 poems- ha!!). Thank you so much for this very generous review and your specific comments! Regards, Sue
Comment from lovemyta
Your poem sounds like a divorce implosion and it actually is. It is imploding from the inside out. It starts from ground zero and up from there. Divorce is horrible and I hate it. I am going through one myself right now. Fortunately my kids are grown and gone from the home.
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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2008
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Your poem sounds like a divorce implosion and it actually is. It is imploding from the inside out. It starts from ground zero and up from there. Divorce is horrible and I hate it. I am going through one myself right now. Fortunately my kids are grown and gone from the home.
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Comment Written 20-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2008
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Thank you very much for reading my poem and for your generous review. All I know is this is how it felt. Best to you with warm regards, Sue