CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 150 "Peace, Sweet Peace"A collection of poetry
109 total reviews
Comment from Sarah_Goldwell
this is an excellent piece of work. It is well written well presented and the words flow nicely. there are no changes needed
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2008
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this is an excellent piece of work. It is well written well presented and the words flow nicely. there are no changes needed
Comment Written 17-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2008
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Goldwell, thank you so much for your very kind review and comments. Much appreciated.....Sue
Comment from allborn66
It is a wonderful poem. I feel very peaceful reading it. I love the flow, and the repeat of the first line. The picture goes very well.
Barbara
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2008
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It is a wonderful poem. I feel very peaceful reading it. I love the flow, and the repeat of the first line. The picture goes very well.
Barbara
Comment Written 17-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2008
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Barbara, thank you so much for your review and specific comments. Glad you like the picture....I really had to think hard about putting one up there or not. Much appreciated......Sue
Comment from KYPollard/El Gato
this is a pleasant, peaceful, almost longing poem, i thought. beautifully written with even stanzas and relaxing words, making it an easy read. good job.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2008
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this is a pleasant, peaceful, almost longing poem, i thought. beautifully written with even stanzas and relaxing words, making it an easy read. good job.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2008
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El Gato....your kind review is very uplifting. Thank you for your comments and glad you found it relaxing! Much appreciated!........Sue
Comment from P1
this is a beautifully written poem
the words are well chosen and carefully
fitted together to make it a flowing
read. i could feel relaxation wash over
me in your words. hugs lynda.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2008
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this is a beautifully written poem
the words are well chosen and carefully
fitted together to make it a flowing
read. i could feel relaxation wash over
me in your words. hugs lynda.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2008
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Lynda, it makes me SO happy to hear you 'feel' my words. That is what it's all about. I want to thank you for your very kind review and comments. Hugs back to you!........Sue
Comment from Donovan
A small respite indeed does refresh us. Thank you for this lovely poem and the sentiment it expresses. I think it is well written and the meaning clear
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2008
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A small respite indeed does refresh us. Thank you for this lovely poem and the sentiment it expresses. I think it is well written and the meaning clear
Comment Written 17-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2008
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Donovan, I want to thank you for your review and comments. So glad you enjoyed it! Very much appreciated......Sue
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello 6teezkid,
What a wonderful relaxing poem to read the flow is wonderful and loved the repeating sounds of -
Peace, sweet peace
thank you for sharing
Gert
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2008
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Hello 6teezkid,
What a wonderful relaxing poem to read the flow is wonderful and loved the repeating sounds of -
Peace, sweet peace
thank you for sharing
Gert
Comment Written 17-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2008
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Gert, thank you for your review and specific comments. I'm also pleased you like the repetition of Peace, sweet peace. Thanks for commenting on that also. Much appreciated!.....Sue
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Sue you are so welcome
smiles
Gert
Comment from nitad
Peace, it does seem to elude us at times, doesn't it?
Your poem has a sweet, easy and yes, peaceful feel to it with a rhythm reminscient of a lullabye. Beautiful.
Take care,
Nita
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2008
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Peace, it does seem to elude us at times, doesn't it?
Your poem has a sweet, easy and yes, peaceful feel to it with a rhythm reminscient of a lullabye. Beautiful.
Take care,
Nita
Comment Written 17-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2008
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Nita, am so pleased you liked it. Thank you so much for your review and comments. Much appreciated.....Sue
Comment from rama devi
Love this. The sounds of the phrases reflect the mood perfectly. Peace, sweet peace is soothingly repeated.
Love the word play of wrest and rest:
Don't wrest me away
From your fleeting presence
tone and tenor are highly effective in this work. Lovely picture too.
No nits.
Warm Regards,
rama devi
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2008
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Love this. The sounds of the phrases reflect the mood perfectly. Peace, sweet peace is soothingly repeated.
Love the word play of wrest and rest:
Don't wrest me away
From your fleeting presence
tone and tenor are highly effective in this work. Lovely picture too.
No nits.
Warm Regards,
rama devi
Comment Written 17-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2008
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Rama, your words are inspiring. Thank you for your review and specific comments. And glad you highlighted the parts you liked. Again, thank you. Much appreciated.....Sue
Comment from JoeKarbo
You write such beautiful imagery, I feel as if I am there, in that peaceful moment, with the joy that it would bring.
I enjoyed this very much.
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You write such beautiful imagery, I feel as if I am there, in that peaceful moment, with the joy that it would bring.
I enjoyed this very much.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2008
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Stay there in that moment! ha! - Joe, I really appreciate your review and comments. So glad you enjoyed it!....Much appreciated.....Sue
Comment from Joan E.
I again enjoyed the repetitions, this time of "peace' for emphasis.
I very much liked the line "Glorious taste waiting to be sipped" and the personification of the "breeze."
You chose a strong title and picture.
Thanks again for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2008
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I again enjoyed the repetitions, this time of "peace' for emphasis.
I very much liked the line "Glorious taste waiting to be sipped" and the personification of the "breeze."
You chose a strong title and picture.
Thanks again for sharing.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2008
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Joan, thank you for your review and specific comments and highlighting the parts that resonated......Much appreciated...Sue