Smokey
Smokey's red bandanna.31 total reviews
Comment from bob cullen
What a good read and God bless Smokey the rodeo clown. Is this poem based on fact or is it just a creation of your imagination. I loved the great flow of this poem.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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What a good read and God bless Smokey the rodeo clown. Is this poem based on fact or is it just a creation of your imagination. I loved the great flow of this poem.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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Thank you, Bob. This was told to me by the Tavern owner. He swears it's true, I have no reason to doubt it. Your review and stars are appreciated.
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Smokey, is a ballad that is a testament to the bravest person in the rodeo arena. The one who goes in when others are running out, and is willing to sacrifice his health and maybe life to keep riders from dying. Here's to Smokey.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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This poem, Smokey, is a ballad that is a testament to the bravest person in the rodeo arena. The one who goes in when others are running out, and is willing to sacrifice his health and maybe life to keep riders from dying. Here's to Smokey.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Thank you, Bill, for the very nice review and stars. I've never considered myself easy to scare, but you'd never get me in the arena with one of those monsters.
Comment from Bobby Cunningham
This is a very clever and creative poetic story that you penned here. The picture accompanying this poem is absolutely perfect. The rhyming is flawless and allows the poem to flow effortlessly. Really great work. Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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This is a very clever and creative poetic story that you penned here. The picture accompanying this poem is absolutely perfect. The rhyming is flawless and allows the poem to flow effortlessly. Really great work. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Thank you, Bobby, for your encouraging words and stars.
Comment from Boogienights
True story? It's a great tale either way, I find it astounding how these guys risk there life at these rodeos..both rodeo clowns and the participants. I love this great rhyming poem.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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True story? It's a great tale either way, I find it astounding how these guys risk there life at these rodeos..both rodeo clowns and the participants. I love this great rhyming poem.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Thank you, for the very nice review and stars. True story.
Comment from Fred Berg
I could read this like a country western song sang by David Allen Coe. Such a story, and told very well. I hope someday this makes it back to Smokeys home town
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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I could read this like a country western song sang by David Allen Coe. Such a story, and told very well. I hope someday this makes it back to Smokeys home town
Comment Written 21-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Thank you, Fred, for the very nice review and stars.
Comment from ElPoetry001
An excellent metaphorical lesson.
The bull rider was the Star. The crowds, cheering; they came from afar.
The clown was not deemed essential; a diversion, at best.
He danced and jumped, and yelled out loud, all to energize the crowd.
Smokey Brown had a serious role, "do not let death take a toll."
Being a protector, a first responder, yet heralded by few; his true purpose was hidden, few knew.
And so he went about his task, to protect the bull rider; his task was vast.
Like police, emergency medical responders, fire fighters, and soldiers, who respond.
For it is not the plaque, the headstone, or the eulogy.
It is the memory of the life that was given, so the life of another may be spared.
Now, all who see the bandana will give a prayer of thanks for Smokey Brown.
His bandana is his crown, a remarkable beacon to all who come around.
Smokey was serious, not "a clown," he was the most courageous man in town.
Many, once famous people, will be forgotten.
Not Smokey Brown, his story will forever ring as the bell to the memory, "...whatever you do for the least of mine, you do for me."
"...hey, Willie, thanks!"
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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An excellent metaphorical lesson.
The bull rider was the Star. The crowds, cheering; they came from afar.
The clown was not deemed essential; a diversion, at best.
He danced and jumped, and yelled out loud, all to energize the crowd.
Smokey Brown had a serious role, "do not let death take a toll."
Being a protector, a first responder, yet heralded by few; his true purpose was hidden, few knew.
And so he went about his task, to protect the bull rider; his task was vast.
Like police, emergency medical responders, fire fighters, and soldiers, who respond.
For it is not the plaque, the headstone, or the eulogy.
It is the memory of the life that was given, so the life of another may be spared.
Now, all who see the bandana will give a prayer of thanks for Smokey Brown.
His bandana is his crown, a remarkable beacon to all who come around.
Smokey was serious, not "a clown," he was the most courageous man in town.
Many, once famous people, will be forgotten.
Not Smokey Brown, his story will forever ring as the bell to the memory, "...whatever you do for the least of mine, you do for me."
"...hey, Willie, thanks!"
Comment Written 21-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the wonderful six stars and rhyming review, they are both enjoyed and appreciated.
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Comment from gramalot8
I love the story in this poem. Thank you for sharing this with us.
I've been to many rodeos and always admired the bravery of the clowns.
They might appear to be there just for entertainment, but, as in the case of Smokey's story, they've saved many a rodeo cowboy's lives.
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I love the story in this poem. Thank you for sharing this with us.
I've been to many rodeos and always admired the bravery of the clowns.
They might appear to be there just for entertainment, but, as in the case of Smokey's story, they've saved many a rodeo cowboy's lives.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2020
Comment from Iza Deleanu
This poem taught me something new, I am not so familiar with the rodeo and the cowboy life, and now I see that this is not such an easy life. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
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This poem taught me something new, I am not so familiar with the rodeo and the cowboy life, and now I see that this is not such an easy life. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2020
Comment from nomi338
Few if indeed any heroes leave home planning to do something heroic. Circumstances along with intestinal fortitude come together to elicit the courageous acts that make one a hero or a goat depending on their actions. The one who runs away in terror just did not have that gene within him. I would not say that it was his fault as much as it was his failing more than anything else.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020
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Few if indeed any heroes leave home planning to do something heroic. Circumstances along with intestinal fortitude come together to elicit the courageous acts that make one a hero or a goat depending on their actions. The one who runs away in terror just did not have that gene within him. I would not say that it was his fault as much as it was his failing more than anything else.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020
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Thank you, my friend for the very nice review and wonderful six stars. You honor me, sir.
Comment from elchupakabra
I think the idea of the piece is 100% there and for the most part I think it's very good, but I think with a bit more whittling and adjusting, this could be turned into an almost sing-songy limerick that would fly off the page (or in this instance screen). Still, great work here, thanks for sharing. Later daze.
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I think the idea of the piece is 100% there and for the most part I think it's very good, but I think with a bit more whittling and adjusting, this could be turned into an almost sing-songy limerick that would fly off the page (or in this instance screen). Still, great work here, thanks for sharing. Later daze.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2020