Comment from
Stephen Force
This is a good 5-7-5 I really liked the illustration of this short verse. I think it compliments the poem well. I wish the verse would have been more descriptive. I think it echoed the picture as opposed to drawing it. Good luck with your entry. Steve
Comment Written 22-May-2020
reply by the author on 22-May-2020
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
Comment from
Susan X Smith
This is a weird little poem and a suitable contest entry. The words evoke a dismal and horrific atmosphere, as suggested by the prompt. The picture is a great addition.
Comment Written 22-May-2020
reply by the author on 22-May-2020
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!