Leap Year Cafe
Meet me there on February 29th 202020 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed the 'feel' of your poem, Laura. Your word flow well with good imagery and a great little story. Writers, usually, can write most anywhere. To meet like you state would be great. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully with Love and Admiration, Jan
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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I enjoyed the 'feel' of your poem, Laura. Your word flow well with good imagery and a great little story. Writers, usually, can write most anywhere. To meet like you state would be great. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully with Love and Admiration, Jan
Comment Written 13-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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Thanks so much for stopping by and reviewing my poem and your comments show you actually understood my words. xo
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
The words in this poem speak about friendship. Friendship is always a good thing and a comfort for one another. You say you live in Canada. Quebec is such a exquisite spot, probably we can have coffee in the dream cafe there.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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The words in this poem speak about friendship. Friendship is always a good thing and a comfort for one another. You say you live in Canada. Quebec is such a exquisite spot, probably we can have coffee in the dream cafe there.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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lol Thanks for your review I appreciate it, My cafe is in imagination only in cyber space where even Quebec is possible..
Comment from Aaqib Naeem
A beautiful poem. Full of meaning and assurance that even though the rest of the world might not recognise us, we the precious few, can be there for each other and truly appreciate the work for what it is.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2020
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A beautiful poem. Full of meaning and assurance that even though the rest of the world might not recognise us, we the precious few, can be there for each other and truly appreciate the work for what it is.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2020
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Thank you for your review and thoughtful comments.
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear Author a lovely thought, Did you intend to have your lines skip regular spacing? It did distract me terribly from your ideas as they were presented one by one. I do not know if other reviewers had the same problem, or just ignored that feature of your entry, or thought it cute!
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2020
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Dear Author a lovely thought, Did you intend to have your lines skip regular spacing? It did distract me terribly from your ideas as they were presented one by one. I do not know if other reviewers had the same problem, or just ignored that feature of your entry, or thought it cute!
Comment Written 11-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2020
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I changed it a bit after reading this, but I do tend to write like I think. Thank you for your considerate review.
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Dear Laurel, mayhaps you are blessed with a leaping mind. many of your generation have them too. Just try to remember that most of the readers and reviewers on FanStory are in their 80s like me.
Comment from Carl DeVere
Thanks for the cyber greeting to an unknown but kindred soul. Yes! Let's meet over an espresso. Let's do like the old Beats did in coffee houses and writer's bars and have Bongo drums playing in the background. Sounds good for an auspicious special day.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2020
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Thanks for the cyber greeting to an unknown but kindred soul. Yes! Let's meet over an espresso. Let's do like the old Beats did in coffee houses and writer's bars and have Bongo drums playing in the background. Sounds good for an auspicious special day.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2020
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Sounds fabulous, thanks for your thoughtful review and comments.
Comment from Gloria ....
What a terrific idea for this contest, Laura. It would be nice if there was a dream cafe that showed up once every four years.
Beautiful job with this and many thanks for joining the contest. I wish you much luck in the voting booth. :))
Gloria
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
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What a terrific idea for this contest, Laura. It would be nice if there was a dream cafe that showed up once every four years.
Beautiful job with this and many thanks for joining the contest. I wish you much luck in the voting booth. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
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Thanks Gloria, I appreciate your review and comments.
Comment from Barbaraj1
You certainly came up with a good poem on what to do with that extra day
we get in February. Very clever. Let's meet at the cyber cafe. Wouldn't that
be fun! Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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You certainly came up with a good poem on what to do with that extra day
we get in February. Very clever. Let's meet at the cyber cafe. Wouldn't that
be fun! Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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Thank you Barb, You are one of the few people, that got what my poem was about, lol, Thanks for your review and comments, Happy New Year.
Comment from Therese Caron
This is a wonderful leap year poem. You've taken a very simple topic and turned it into a complex yet understandable poem. Sometimes I realize how different I am when I ask people if they think in words or pictures. The majority answers pictures. I think completely in words and they run in front of my face like a ticker tape while I'm talking or listening to someone else. I think that is why bad grammar totally throws me. That is why I like the line words come faster than you can pen. Writers float.I think you have a terrific contest entry here. This is a wonderful poem. Best of luck! Terry C.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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This is a wonderful leap year poem. You've taken a very simple topic and turned it into a complex yet understandable poem. Sometimes I realize how different I am when I ask people if they think in words or pictures. The majority answers pictures. I think completely in words and they run in front of my face like a ticker tape while I'm talking or listening to someone else. I think that is why bad grammar totally throws me. That is why I like the line words come faster than you can pen. Writers float.I think you have a terrific contest entry here. This is a wonderful poem. Best of luck! Terry C.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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Thank you, Therese, for your review and astute comments.
Comment from June Sargent
Anything is possible in a leap year! A cafe sounds like just the place to meet and exchange ideas and creative inspiration. Wordsmiths unite! Very clever piece!
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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Anything is possible in a leap year! A cafe sounds like just the place to meet and exchange ideas and creative inspiration. Wordsmiths unite! Very clever piece!
Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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Thanks June just a bit of fun and fantasy, Your reviews are very welcome.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the twenty-twenty leap year an extra day for us to be creative and play with words that become a work of art for many while others will struggle to put something sensible together.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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A very well-written poem about the twenty-twenty leap year an extra day for us to be creative and play with words that become a work of art for many while others will struggle to put something sensible together.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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Thank you, Sandra, for reading and reviewing