Comment from Halfree

Excellent

Delightful posting ... caught a moment in time that you may well return to in the years to come. Enjoyed the read, what more needs to be said?

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019

Thanks, Halfree. Any suggestions for improvement?

Comment from samandlancelot

Excellent

Aiona,

I enjoyed your fun read. The way you caught your son's conversation as he killed the ice zombie and made a funny, rhyming poem out of it shows how talented you are. You can write about anything and make it work.

Patricia

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2019

Thanks! I owe it to my son for being funny, too. Maybe I should make Minecraft ballad...? hrm.

Comment from Scarbrems

Excellent

Ha ha ha. When I worked with kids, they used to talk about this all the time. It's like listening to another language, isn't it? A fun write, best of luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2019

Thanks! Yeah, I had to Google it to understand what he was saying...?? LOL!