Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Nicely written philosophical one liner about where we all want or days and destiny to end. What we want our ultimate destination to be.

Good luck in the contest.

Keep writing

dp

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019

I will keep writing because of readers such as you. Thank you so much for the R&R. You are so good at this craft, it is meaningful to have your support.
Mystery Writer

reply by dragonpoet on 19-Feb-2019

You're welcome and thanks for the compliment.

dp

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Very nice image and presentation.
-Thanks for your note.
-The imagery is effective in
your poem, and the alliteration
emphasizes the meaning well.
-"Dawn" allows the reader
to picture one like the photo.
-You also have a good message.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019

Thank you Pam for this appreciative review. Dawn broke beautifully this morning and it inspired. Nature is glorious even when it appears foul with ferocious storms and consequences of those. I was fortunate to find this perfect image by DickLeeShay and was able to use it.
Many blessings
,Mystery writer

reply by Pam (respa) on 17-Feb-2019

You are very welcome, Mystery Writer. I appreciate your reply and sharing about being inspired by the dawn this morning.

reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019

Comment from gsuarez

Excellent

Beautiful photograph powered by transcending words. I felt the power of God's majesty reflected in this piece. How each day we come closer and closer to Eden.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019

I am honored by these kind comments. Thank you for reading and complimenting this monostitch. I feel fortunate to have the use of this image for my words. and thank the provider, DickLee.
Many blessings,
Mystery writer