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Viewing comments for Chapter 62 "Man"
Dawn of Chaos
2 total reviews
Comment from
Earl Corp
My takeaway is you have a very dim view of mankind and his impact on this planet. I was under the impression God created man before the animals and then gave him dominion over them.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
King James at least in Genesis relates animals then man, viewing man, male and female, being family: nuts. Thanking you for your generous rate and warm sentiments.
Comment from
QC Poet
Conceptually interesting and thought provoking. A believe a review for possible grammatical issues will improve this fine work, great thought provoking poetry.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
Appreciate the heads up do suffer pits in my write, revisions prompted by reviewers like you aid my efforts. Thanking you for your generous rate and warm sentiments.
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