Comment from mermaids

Excellent

This is definitely an interesting story. You have quite a large family but it seems that everyone works hard and helps out. It would be interesting to read more about your family.

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2018

Thanks,I fell short on this I really did not know the direction I wanted to go and did not get back to it. I apologize for my shoddy work. I grew up in a bad religion and the farm was the fun part.

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Average

You have led a very storied and interesting life -- enjoyed hearing about it!! :) :) I have included below some grammatical catches -- employ or ignore as you like. :) ;) Thank you so very much for sharing with all of us and best wishes in the contest! :) ;)

"a dental comany" -- 'a dental company'

"once, we had" -- 'once. We had'

"vegetables I made" -- 'vegetables. I made'

"cows often" -- 'cows; it was often'

"milking, we ground and I mixed bread often 16 loaves at once my" -- 'milking. We ground grain, and I mixed bread, often 16 loaves at once. [new paragraph here]My'

"fences,buildings and planting along" -- 'fences and buildings and help with the planting along'

"hay. At first when my little sister married our husband we turned" -- 'hay. [new paragraph here] At first, when my little sister married our husband, we turned'

"and for years were" -- 'and, for years, were'

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2018

Thank you I should not have entered this I did not do much work on it, I am trying to wake myself up and do a better job.