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Viewing comments for Chapter 125 "Autumn of Life"Eclectic style
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Comment from Rikki66
Beautiful artwork and verse that reminds me that winter is coming all too soon. Spring and summer are but memories the fall is what I have.
rikki
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2019
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Beautiful artwork and verse that reminds me that winter is coming all too soon. Spring and summer are but memories the fall is what I have.
rikki
Comment Written 07-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2019
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You?re a loyal reviewer Rikki, and I thank you for that
Hugs, Trisha
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Loyal to Me Lady
lxvi
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is a lovely metaphorical piece of poetic art. You capture the essence of how Autumn speaks to the reality of aging. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Enjoy your time off :).
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2019
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This is a lovely metaphorical piece of poetic art. You capture the essence of how Autumn speaks to the reality of aging. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Enjoy your time off :).
Comment Written 07-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2019
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Thank you very much. It won?t be a very long break!
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Such a beautifully descriptive offering, Trisha, for those in the Autumn of life - whether early, mid, or late.... thanx for the warmth this morning! :) Yvette
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2019
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Such a beautifully descriptive offering, Trisha, for those in the Autumn of life - whether early, mid, or late.... thanx for the warmth this morning! :) Yvette
Comment Written 07-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2019
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Thanks so much Yvette, I?ll be back soon I hope.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Debbie Pope
This is lovely, Trisha, but oh so sad. I hope you are doing well. I hope you have many bright colored memories all around your tall, strong trunk. The first poem that I ever wrote, 10th grade, compared people to a tree. I still love the image.
Good to talk to you again.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2019
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This is lovely, Trisha, but oh so sad. I hope you are doing well. I hope you have many bright colored memories all around your tall, strong trunk. The first poem that I ever wrote, 10th grade, compared people to a tree. I still love the image.
Good to talk to you again.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2019
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Trees have a beauty all their own. I never realized just how many styles of bark patterns, shapes etc.there are. Thanks, I agree life cycle is sad
Hugs, Trisha. I won?t be Fan Storying for a little while
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Are you feeling ok?
Comment from Cindy Warren
Autumn can be wonderful, whether it's our later years or a walk in the woods in October. I love that picture. It's the perfect accompaniment to your poem.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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Autumn can be wonderful, whether it's our later years or a walk in the woods in October. I love that picture. It's the perfect accompaniment to your poem.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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Thanks, Cindy for your review. Autumn is my favorite season, although I get nostalgic
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Bucketlist
I have picked out this stanza, why it reminds me as I get older day by day since I had a stroke where I lost part of my vision---
Many are richer in hue
Some last longer to wither
In the third season of life
Health has a played a part
Gert
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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Hello Bucketlist
I have picked out this stanza, why it reminds me as I get older day by day since I had a stroke where I lost part of my vision---
Many are richer in hue
Some last longer to wither
In the third season of life
Health has a played a part
Gert
Comment Written 06-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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Oh I?m sorry to hear that , Gert. Thanks so much for your kind review
Hugs,Trisha
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You are so welcome Bucketlist
Gert
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written poem about the trees of our life. I like the way you compared our life to that of trees in the fall of the year. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this.
Please check this one thing:
Health has a played a part
take the a out after has - Health has played a part.....
love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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This is a very well written poem about the trees of our life. I like the way you compared our life to that of trees in the fall of the year. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this.
Please check this one thing:
Health has a played a part
take the a out after has - Health has played a part.....
love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 06-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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Thanks for your kind review, the ?a? has been erased
Hugs, Trisha