Timeless
5-7-5 Entry10 total reviews
Comment from donette1914
simply beautiful and so touching and i love this piece!!!
you have amazing talent
very creative
it was a pleasure to read your work
and i hope for the best in the contest
donette1914@ Aug 26 2018
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2018
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simply beautiful and so touching and i love this piece!!!
you have amazing talent
very creative
it was a pleasure to read your work
and i hope for the best in the contest
donette1914@ Aug 26 2018
Comment Written 26-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2018
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Thank you for dropping by to read and share your sentiments on my poem!
Comment from Liz O'Neill
In three lines you have captured a beautiful story. The imagery is very touching.
I'm sure you have drawn in the reader who has had similar experiences. I've always found writing to be healing. I hope the reader, you and I have healed a little bit here. Thank You.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2018
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In three lines you have captured a beautiful story. The imagery is very touching.
I'm sure you have drawn in the reader who has had similar experiences. I've always found writing to be healing. I hope the reader, you and I have healed a little bit here. Thank You.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2018
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Appreciate very much your taking the time to read and share your sentiments.
Comment from poetwatch
I understand what you mean and I like what you wrote. I forgot the tango or did I ever tango? How time flies as we look at the past. This is a good entry for the 5-7-5 contest. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
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I understand what you mean and I like what you wrote. I forgot the tango or did I ever tango? How time flies as we look at the past. This is a good entry for the 5-7-5 contest. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
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Thank you for your encouraging comments.
Comment from LynnetteOK
This is a wonderfully romantic poem. It speaks to a lifelong love, which is a beautiful thing.
I really like the picture you chose. It goes well with the poem and adds even more emphasis on the lifelong aspect.
Well written!
Best of luck in the contest,
LynnetteOK
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
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This is a wonderfully romantic poem. It speaks to a lifelong love, which is a beautiful thing.
I really like the picture you chose. It goes well with the poem and adds even more emphasis on the lifelong aspect.
Well written!
Best of luck in the contest,
LynnetteOK
Comment Written 24-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
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Thank you for dropping by to read and share your sentiments. It is much appreciated.
Comment from Debbie Pope
What a poignant use of seventeen syllables. It makes me sad because I could have written those exact words about my life. Now at least I can enjoy my children and grandchildren as they dance the night away.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
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What a poignant use of seventeen syllables. It makes me sad because I could have written those exact words about my life. Now at least I can enjoy my children and grandchildren as they dance the night away.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
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So glad you dropped by to read and share your sentiments about timeless love. It was appreciated.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I recently had a night out with my two daughters and soon became tired and wanted to go home when they still have life in them and wanted to party! Your words reminded me of my night out! He he he, few words painting a picture, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
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I recently had a night out with my two daughters and soon became tired and wanted to go home when they still have life in them and wanted to party! Your words reminded me of my night out! He he he, few words painting a picture, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
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So glad you dropped by to read and share your sentiments about timeless love. It was appreciated. I danced at a party recently and...regretted it later. Love may be timeless, but our bodies are not!
Comment from LeftHandedScribe
The photo sells your words so well. Each piece of architecture in the picture speaks worlds about this couple. A lovely creation beautifully realized.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
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The photo sells your words so well. Each piece of architecture in the picture speaks worlds about this couple. A lovely creation beautifully realized.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
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So glad you dropped by to read and share your sentiments about timeless love. It was appreciated.
Comment from michaelcahill
Love the idea of this that the memory is no different than the current feeling it brings up, thus, timeless. A beautiful subtle presentation, perfect illustration and color choices. A really nice piece. One thing though, I think you have six syllables in your last line, so you may want to check that. An easy fix and there's plenty of time. Good luck in the contest with this strong entry. :)) mike
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2018
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Love the idea of this that the memory is no different than the current feeling it brings up, thus, timeless. A beautiful subtle presentation, perfect illustration and color choices. A really nice piece. One thing though, I think you have six syllables in your last line, so you may want to check that. An easy fix and there's plenty of time. Good luck in the contest with this strong entry. :)) mike
Comment Written 23-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2018
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Thanks, Mike, for the heads up on the last line. After writing and rewriting I lose count after awhile! These short poems are actually harder for me to write! Appreciate your reading and sharing your insights.
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I do it ALL the time. Just a little tune up. LOL!! No worries. I always count and hope SOMEONE does for me too. :))
Comment from barkingdog
Those were grand old days. Great memories.
Wouldn't it be great to dance the night away now.
Your syllable count is fine. The picture is perfect.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2018
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Those were grand old days. Great memories.
Wouldn't it be great to dance the night away now.
Your syllable count is fine. The picture is perfect.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2018
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Thank you for sharing your insights. It is appreciated.
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
The photo you chose to accompany your poem is very fitting! I love the sentiment of "young love" that turned into "forever love." ;) A well-written and nicely formatted 5-7-5. I hope you do well in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2018
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The photo you chose to accompany your poem is very fitting! I love the sentiment of "young love" that turned into "forever love." ;) A well-written and nicely formatted 5-7-5. I hope you do well in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2018
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Thank you for sharing your insights. It is appreciated.
