Your Life
Live it well47 total reviews
Comment from cajunjoe
Not bad for a short, short poem such as this. Much too short to say a lot, just my opinion. But this is saying about your life and how your life runs on every day and it is not a bad outlook or focus. Great entry for the contest.
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Not bad for a short, short poem such as this. Much too short to say a lot, just my opinion. But this is saying about your life and how your life runs on every day and it is not a bad outlook or focus. Great entry for the contest.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2018
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Opinion appreciated and Thank you very much, I need opinions when trying a new form****kahpot
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you're welcome
Comment from Yemima Kebede1
Wow! Another amazing poem. It's so beautiful! It's nice to see you again in this beautiful piece. I can't wait to look at your other brilliant works. Great job!
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Wow! Another amazing poem. It's so beautiful! It's nice to see you again in this beautiful piece. I can't wait to look at your other brilliant works. Great job!
Comment Written 11-Jul-2018
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Wow! thank you very much for your wonderful review****kahpot
Comment from royowen
It's so right, particularly for those that proceed you, how you live your life is important to them, we set a trend a tradition, I feel the weight of that, albeit a light one, and take it seriously, beautifully written, and a meal fo thought, well done, good job, blessings, Roy
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It's so right, particularly for those that proceed you, how you live your life is important to them, we set a trend a tradition, I feel the weight of that, albeit a light one, and take it seriously, beautifully written, and a meal fo thought, well done, good job, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 11-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Donka Kristeva
Simple truths take not many words. This 5-7-5 poem sounds like a claim to spiritual facts altogether and following one's conviction. Wonderful work.
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Simple truths take not many words. This 5-7-5 poem sounds like a claim to spiritual facts altogether and following one's conviction. Wonderful work.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
begin your journey
walk your path honorably
claim your destiny...A beautiful poem which is well crafted and speaks of your own mentality. Well done this is marvelous good luck in the contest kindest regards Meia x
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begin your journey
walk your path honorably
claim your destiny...A beautiful poem which is well crafted and speaks of your own mentality. Well done this is marvelous good luck in the contest kindest regards Meia x
Comment Written 11-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Rose King1
Words to live by, very Powerful for 17 syllables. For some it can take a life time to realize and others to achieve. "begin your journey" This made me realize that regardless whether your ready or not once born the journey begins. "walk your path honorably" This says we have a choice no matter what life throws our way, we have a choice we can choose to be honorable or dishonorable which will shape our destiny. Well done...Thanks for the insight.
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Words to live by, very Powerful for 17 syllables. For some it can take a life time to realize and others to achieve. "begin your journey" This made me realize that regardless whether your ready or not once born the journey begins. "walk your path honorably" This says we have a choice no matter what life throws our way, we have a choice we can choose to be honorable or dishonorable which will shape our destiny. Well done...Thanks for the insight.
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Comment Written 11-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much, I will have to try harder to earn more than 4 stars, so any help would be much appreciated, many thanks****kahpot
Comment from Cedar
I like your words of wisdom, very well said. It should be a good contender in the contest because your words are what people want to here. Good luck...Bill
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I like your words of wisdom, very well said. It should be a good contender in the contest because your words are what people want to here. Good luck...Bill
Comment Written 11-Jul-2018
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Thankyou very much****kahpot
Comment from victor 66
Yes, you are right. Live your life well and without regret, and then you have no reason to fear death. You've done everything that was required of you and "you have no outing standing debts". That's a good life. Best wishes.
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Yes, you are right. Live your life well and without regret, and then you have no reason to fear death. You've done everything that was required of you and "you have no outing standing debts". That's a good life. Best wishes.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2018
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You're welcome.
Comment from Hugh McDowell
Excellent work. I like how the responsibility for the quality of life is put on the individual. Begin, walk, claim: great word choice for each line. If one doesn't claim their destiny, who will? Great picture. Hugh
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Excellent work. I like how the responsibility for the quality of life is put on the individual. Begin, walk, claim: great word choice for each line. If one doesn't claim their destiny, who will? Great picture. Hugh
Comment Written 11-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from June Sargent
If you've walked the noble path, then you can certainly claim your destiny. However, most not only do not choose an honorable path - but they endanger others along the way. Great sentiments beautifully expressed in a few short lines.
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If you've walked the noble path, then you can certainly claim your destiny. However, most not only do not choose an honorable path - but they endanger others along the way. Great sentiments beautifully expressed in a few short lines.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot