Prickly Anticipation
Poem of 20 Syllables3 total reviews
Comment from Miriam Collins
I really like your poem! I love the descriptive word choice of "prickly", as well as the photo you chose to go with it. And the story is lovely too! I think everyone feels a little better when they get out and see and smell the flowers. I think you do a good job of creating an image for your readers, as well as something to think deeper upon. Good job!
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
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I really like your poem! I love the descriptive word choice of "prickly", as well as the photo you chose to go with it. And the story is lovely too! I think everyone feels a little better when they get out and see and smell the flowers. I think you do a good job of creating an image for your readers, as well as something to think deeper upon. Good job!
Comment Written 25-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
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Really appreciate your dropping by to read, review and offer insights!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I loved this write as now the flower has bloomed we forget all about the prickly anticipation of it! Good luck with the contest, this is a good entry, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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I loved this write as now the flower has bloomed we forget all about the prickly anticipation of it! Good luck with the contest, this is a good entry, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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Thank you, Dolly, for your insights and support.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautifully written 20 syllable poem you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery. Best wishes to you in the contest! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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This is a very beautifully written 20 syllable poem you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery. Best wishes to you in the contest! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 24-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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Appreciate the positive feedback.