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Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "ZigZagging through the Alphabet"Daily poems for April 2018
19 total reviews
Comment from Artasylum
Hi Chrissy... you deserve an A + to infinity for this one... sooooo well done you are a super hero for this one. everything is perfect. keep the surprises coming. yrs, diana
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
Hi Chrissy... you deserve an A + to infinity for this one... sooooo well done you are a super hero for this one. everything is perfect. keep the surprises coming. yrs, diana
Comment Written 07-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
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Hi Diane, Thank you for reading my poem for this Challenge and running a little behind now trying to catch up LOL Cheers Christine
Comment from Harry Smith
You did a fantastic job with this poem. The presentation is very good with a picture that really compliments the poem and a poem that is very well written with lots of imagery.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2018
You did a fantastic job with this poem. The presentation is very good with a picture that really compliments the poem and a poem that is very well written with lots of imagery.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2018
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Hi HarryThank you for reading my poem and It was a fun challenge to ger through I enjoy these and glad to have yoir feedback Cheers Christine
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A marathon write using all the alphabet letters and this is quite a challenge and you managed to perfect it here with your wonderful words, a joy to read, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2018
A marathon write using all the alphabet letters and this is quite a challenge and you managed to perfect it here with your wonderful words, a joy to read, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2018
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Hi Dolly Thanks so much and it was chalenging bu I got there in the end but I am behind in myApril Post busy weekend so I will have to fet going to make it up Cheers Christine
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
What a unique and fun challenge to go through the whole alphabet to write a poem about writing. I smiled when I read: questioning my syllables...I've been there. This was entertaining.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2018
What a unique and fun challenge to go through the whole alphabet to write a poem about writing. I smiled when I read: questioning my syllables...I've been there. This was entertaining.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2018
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Hi Cindy Thanks amd yes I am often questioning my Syllables LOL they can make or break you Glad ypu enjoyed this Cheers Christine
Comment from Sharon Haiste
Well done. You zigged and zagged quite nicely through that.
Your poem flows and has a good rhythm.
Thank you for sharing this fun verse with us.
Sharon
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2018
Well done. You zigged and zagged quite nicely through that.
Your poem flows and has a good rhythm.
Thank you for sharing this fun verse with us.
Sharon
Comment Written 06-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2018
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Hi Sharon Thanks and it was fun to do but now I am behind in my posts busy weekend so have to catch up Cheers Christine
Comment from karenina
Any
Body
Can
Dream
Even
Fools.
Generally
However
I deal with the
Juxtaposition.s
Kicks and
Hiccups.
Luck
May be
Needed.
Or
Potions magical...
Quagmires
rise up
sneakily...
Then, alas,
Unbelievably-
Victory!
(Wonderously??)
Xanthic
(Yellow)
Zanyism!
(Did I miss a letter cuz that was all kinds of fun!)
Karenina
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2018
Any
Body
Can
Dream
Even
Fools.
Generally
However
I deal with the
Juxtaposition.s
Kicks and
Hiccups.
Luck
May be
Needed.
Or
Potions magical...
Quagmires
rise up
sneakily...
Then, alas,
Unbelievably-
Victory!
(Wonderously??)
Xanthic
(Yellow)
Zanyism!
(Did I miss a letter cuz that was all kinds of fun!)
Karenina
Comment Written 06-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2018
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Abolutely
Beautiful
Crafted
Did
Every
Finicky
Gap
Harvesting
Inventive
Judicoius
Knowledgeable
Lines
Making
Narrative
Observable
Personifying
Quality
Resources
Spontaneously
Taken
Under
Various
Words
Xyresic
Yeasty
Zeal
Xyresic (razor sharp)
Yeasty (exhuberantly creative)
Zeal ( ardently devoted to a purpose)
Thanks foy your fun review Cheers Christine
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Xresic!? Never heard of it but love the definition! :)
Comment from meeshu
well done and fun, Christine. gets tougher toward the end doesn't it.
I like the "circle" of writing about how tough it is to write the poem you're writing.
but you stole the picture from one of mine....kidding, fits yours better.......meeshu
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2018
well done and fun, Christine. gets tougher toward the end doesn't it.
I like the "circle" of writing about how tough it is to write the poem you're writing.
but you stole the picture from one of mine....kidding, fits yours better.......meeshu
Comment Written 06-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2018
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Hi meeshu, Thanks and yes these letters do get harder But I think these worked reasonably well LOL the pic was the only letter one so it gets used a lot too Ha Ha Cheers Christine
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you're welcome. and I just noticed the cleverness in the title Z-A.
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello!
Well, you certainly "zigzagged" with a flair! What a challenge! And you completed it with creativity. I enjoyed reading your entire poem - anticipating what you were going to write for each letter. Kudos!
diane
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2018
Hello!
Well, you certainly "zigzagged" with a flair! What a challenge! And you completed it with creativity. I enjoyed reading your entire poem - anticipating what you were going to write for each letter. Kudos!
diane
Comment Written 06-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2018
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Hi Diane, Thanks you and It is chellenging I have done a few with the alphabet but this was a bit different X&Z always hard Bit I am pleased you enjoyed this one.Cheers christine
Hi Diane, Thanks for your review I am pleased you enjoyed this and the letter are challenging especialky X z LOL Busy weekend coming up Cheers Christine
Comment from Teri7
Christine, This is a great ABC poem titled Zigzagging Through the Alphabet. You used very good descriptive words and I love the art work you chose. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2018
Christine, This is a great ABC poem titled Zigzagging Through the Alphabet. You used very good descriptive words and I love the art work you chose. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 06-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2018
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Hi Teri, Thanks for your review it was fun to try to get throughthe alphabet but made it LOL Cheers Christine
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
This is more than a zigzagging through the alphabet. It is rather a blissful and progressive slide along the alphabet.
The work earns its texture through the etching of the alphabet into a semblance of an acrostic poem.
Excellent work! Keep the flag flying!
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2018
This is more than a zigzagging through the alphabet. It is rather a blissful and progressive slide along the alphabet.
The work earns its texture through the etching of the alphabet into a semblance of an acrostic poem.
Excellent work! Keep the flag flying!
Comment Written 06-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2018
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Hi Lloyd, Thanks so much for reading and reviewing my Acrostic thype alphabet LOL a fun challenge Flag hoisted Cheers Christine
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Remain Blessed!