Angelic Reflection
30-syllable poem6 total reviews
Comment from Pamusart
This is a good entry for the contest. Very prophetic with a very deep message. Of course, in Heaven's mirror you look angelic. The question is regarding your state of being after you turned away from the mirror. We're you really an angel? Would that mean you are dead? Maybe it was just a vision. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2018
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This is a good entry for the contest. Very prophetic with a very deep message. Of course, in Heaven's mirror you look angelic. The question is regarding your state of being after you turned away from the mirror. We're you really an angel? Would that mean you are dead? Maybe it was just a vision. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2018
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Dear Pamusart, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Sugarray77
You have done a fantastic job in creating a 30 syllable poem entry for the contest. I love verses about angels and you've done a great job with this one. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2018
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You have done a fantastic job in creating a 30 syllable poem entry for the contest. I love verses about angels and you've done a great job with this one. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2018
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Dear Sugarray77, Thank you for your comments and review, and good luck wishes.
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
I wonder if this is wishful thinking. I also wonder if there would be a need for mirrors in heaven. I would doubt it. Also, sounds a little like pride to me, which may just be frowned upon... lol
Good job with the syllable count and the image is clear.
All the best
GMG
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2018
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Hi there,
I wonder if this is wishful thinking. I also wonder if there would be a need for mirrors in heaven. I would doubt it. Also, sounds a little like pride to me, which may just be frowned upon... lol
Good job with the syllable count and the image is clear.
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 03-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2018
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Dear giraffmang, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Bill Schott
This thirty-syllable poem, Angelic Reflection, has the wording right and seems to place the writer in heaven with a mirror. I have to say that a mirror would not be my first choice.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2018
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This thirty-syllable poem, Angelic Reflection, has the wording right and seems to place the writer in heaven with a mirror. I have to say that a mirror would not be my first choice.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2018
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Dear Bill, Thank you for your comments and review.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 30 Syllables writing prompt.
Your lovely, short piece tells of your angelic reflection perfectly.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2018
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I think this is a good entry for the 30 Syllables writing prompt.
Your lovely, short piece tells of your angelic reflection perfectly.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 02-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2018
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Dear Sharon, Thank you for your comments and review.
Comment from William Ross
Very nice and fits the prompt well, I like this but not what I see when I look into the mirror,lol. Good luck and have a great day
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2018
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Very nice and fits the prompt well, I like this but not what I see when I look into the mirror,lol. Good luck and have a great day
Comment Written 02-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2018
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Dear William, Thank you for your comments and review.