Haiku (dry autumn leaves crunch)
Haiku 5-7-532 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
nicely pensive haiku which gives a clear image of an Autumn walk. It is well illustrated by the artwork. Congrats of winning the contest.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2018
nicely pensive haiku which gives a clear image of an Autumn walk. It is well illustrated by the artwork. Congrats of winning the contest.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 15-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2018
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Thank you so much dragonpoet for popping in to review my haiku poem. I appreciate your comments and contest wishes. Kindest regards ~DD
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Any time, dd
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Comment from Contests
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2018
A contest winning entry! A seven star rating from the Contest Committee for posting the winning contest entry. |
Comment Written 13-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2018
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Thank you so very much Contest Committee. The seven star recognition is a real morale booster. I truly appreciate the encouragement. THANK YOU ~DD
Comment from Rubylou
Hello DD,
As I read your haiku, I couldn't help but think how nature speaks to us.
"silent thoughts broken" this line speaks volumes about how we need to heed the message of the natural world around us.
Nicely written. Rubylou
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2018
Hello DD,
As I read your haiku, I couldn't help but think how nature speaks to us.
"silent thoughts broken" this line speaks volumes about how we need to heed the message of the natural world around us.
Nicely written. Rubylou
Comment Written 12-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2018
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Thank you Rubylou for your most thoughtful review on my haiku poem. Yes, the message of the natural world, although all around us, seems to be ignored by many that are too busy and out of touch to appreciate it. Going on walks always helps one to feel in touch again. It helps me anyway. Best regards ~DD
Comment from Tim0443
This is a great Haiku. Autumn is my favorite. It's hard to be in a listless mood when the leaves are literally shouting the exciting news of the season with every crunching footstep.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
This is a great Haiku. Autumn is my favorite. It's hard to be in a listless mood when the leaves are literally shouting the exciting news of the season with every crunching footstep.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
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Thank you so much Tim. I appreciate you taking the time to review my Haiku poem. Your comments were a pleasure to read ...leaves are literally shouting...fantastic! I love autumn too. Thank you for the sparkly sixers. ~DD
Comment from Ogden
My concentration also can easily be broken by what usually are unnoticed sounds.
Excellent haiku with the perfect illustration, DD.
Good luck in the contest, matey.
Don
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2018
My concentration also can easily be broken by what usually are unnoticed sounds.
Excellent haiku with the perfect illustration, DD.
Good luck in the contest, matey.
Don
Comment Written 09-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2018
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Thank you Don for your contest wishes and gratefully received review. Always a pleasure to hear from you. ~DD
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You are most welcome, DD.
Don
Comment from BeasPeas
This is very nicely composed. The image is tranquil and quiet as your poem expresses. I like the last line which is perfect to unite the descriptive autumn crunching leaves with silent thoughts. Marilyn
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2018
This is very nicely composed. The image is tranquil and quiet as your poem expresses. I like the last line which is perfect to unite the descriptive autumn crunching leaves with silent thoughts. Marilyn
Comment Written 09-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2018
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Thank you Marilyn. I'm pleased you enjoyed my haiku poem and I am grateful for the comments. ~DD
Comment from tony bronk
A wonderful third line.It comes from somewhere else, yet i fits well. It is a lovely haiku and and I like it lots. Tony
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2018
A wonderful third line.It comes from somewhere else, yet i fits well. It is a lovely haiku and and I like it lots. Tony
Comment Written 09-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2018
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Thank you Tony. I appreciate your comments on my haiku poem. ~DD
Comment from N. Rabwar
I definitely like the energy of this piece and the places it takes me. It slows my mind down and it takes me to a beautiful trail on a crisp autumn day when my life was simpler and more carefree. I enjoy poetry that help shift me to this place.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2018
I definitely like the energy of this piece and the places it takes me. It slows my mind down and it takes me to a beautiful trail on a crisp autumn day when my life was simpler and more carefree. I enjoy poetry that help shift me to this place.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2018
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Thank you so much for taking the time to review my Haiku poem. Your comments are greatly appreciated. ~DD
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the autumn leaves crunching underneath your feet that breaks your silent thoughts on a daily walk through the forest before sunset.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2018
A very well-written poem about the autumn leaves crunching underneath your feet that breaks your silent thoughts on a daily walk through the forest before sunset.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2018
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Thank you for your review Sandra. Much appreciated. ~DD
Comment from misscookie
Once again you captured my attention from this lovely artwork that you choose to go with your poem
Yes your words are few yet it covers every thing and more.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2018
Once again you captured my attention from this lovely artwork that you choose to go with your poem
Yes your words are few yet it covers every thing and more.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 09-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2018
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Thank you MissCookie. I appreciate you taking the time to review my haiku poem. Have a wonderful weekend. ~DD
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You're very welcome, until next time.
Cookie
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You're very welcome.
Cookie