The Easy Way
There is more than one way to hide eggs38 total reviews
Comment from Irish Rain
Clever Easter bunny!!! Letting the chicken do his job, ha ha. You actually had a chicken named 'Cluck?' That is too cute! Good luck, blessings...
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Clever Easter bunny!!! Letting the chicken do his job, ha ha. You actually had a chicken named 'Cluck?' That is too cute! Good luck, blessings...
Comment Written 05-Mar-2017
Comment from Benny Beeharry
Hi friend I do feel young again in the kindergarten, even at this age above sixty i love stories of bunnies at other animals personifying human .
Danny Jock
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Hi friend I do feel young again in the kindergarten, even at this age above sixty i love stories of bunnies at other animals personifying human .
Danny Jock
Comment Written 05-Mar-2017
Comment from winnona
A well-written contest entry. This is actually funny. Your well chosen words flowed and combined easily forming the message of the poem for the reader. very well done.
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A well-written contest entry. This is actually funny. Your well chosen words flowed and combined easily forming the message of the poem for the reader. very well done.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2017
Comment from w.j.debi
This is fun. You create such Easter imagery with the Easter Bunny and his pet chicken. I always wondered where all the eggs came from. It makes so much sense to pair the two critters.
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This is fun. You create such Easter imagery with the Easter Bunny and his pet chicken. I always wondered where all the eggs came from. It makes so much sense to pair the two critters.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2017
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good image; I like the chicken's name, too!
-Format is good.
-Very clever content; the Easter Bunny
also has a creative way of getting the
eggs hidden for the children!
-Good ending.
-A good entry; good luck in the contest.
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-Good image; I like the chicken's name, too!
-Format is good.
-Very clever content; the Easter Bunny
also has a creative way of getting the
eggs hidden for the children!
-Good ending.
-A good entry; good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2017
Comment from rspoet
This is a fine entry for the contest
with the correct syllables at 5-7-5
Looks like fresh eggs for Easter
Excellent art work to match
Good humor
Best of luck in the contest
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This is a fine entry for the contest
with the correct syllables at 5-7-5
Looks like fresh eggs for Easter
Excellent art work to match
Good humor
Best of luck in the contest
Comment Written 04-Mar-2017
Comment from suep
Good internal rhyme with walk/squawk. Love the visual your words create with perfectly matching artwork. Fun and creative. Made me smile. Nice work ... Best wishes in the contest! :)
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Good internal rhyme with walk/squawk. Love the visual your words create with perfectly matching artwork. Fun and creative. Made me smile. Nice work ... Best wishes in the contest! :)
Comment Written 04-Mar-2017
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
This is so very funny and clever I was chuckling away reading this bloody fantastic and very much enjoyed by me, this is so right for the competition, good luck, Meia x
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This is so very funny and clever I was chuckling away reading this bloody fantastic and very much enjoyed by me, this is so right for the competition, good luck, Meia x
Comment Written 04-Mar-2017
Comment from dragonpoet
This seems a dangerous way to hide eggs. The eggs might break as they hit the ground. But there would be no smell of vinegar around the house because no dyeing the eggs would be needed.
The poem fits the contest well. Hope it does well.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
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This seems a dangerous way to hide eggs. The eggs might break as they hit the ground. But there would be no smell of vinegar around the house because no dyeing the eggs would be needed.
The poem fits the contest well. Hope it does well.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 04-Mar-2017
Comment from Bill Schott
This humorous 5-7-5, The Easy Way, has the right syllable count and creates an hilarious picture of an efficient Easter Bunny making his rounds. Not do fun for chickens.
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This humorous 5-7-5, The Easy Way, has the right syllable count and creates an hilarious picture of an efficient Easter Bunny making his rounds. Not do fun for chickens.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2017
