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Just a clay vessel.95 total reviews
Comment from Judy Couch
Very good poem. It rhymes well and has good rhythm. It carries a great message. We are all made by God and we shouldn't criticize others. They're His kids, too.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2016
Very good poem. It rhymes well and has good rhythm. It carries a great message. We are all made by God and we shouldn't criticize others. They're His kids, too.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2016
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Thanks Judy, for these really great comments and fine review, blessings, Roy
Comment from Bollie
This is an excellent poem that highlights God's infinite wisdom. For God made all of us unique and for his glory. The poem has beautiful verses that have no forced rhyming with strong message. I was so close to giving you 6 stars, but I noticed a tiny variation in the syllable count from 7 to 9. Overall this is a great entry. Good luck and congadulations.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2016
This is an excellent poem that highlights God's infinite wisdom. For God made all of us unique and for his glory. The poem has beautiful verses that have no forced rhyming with strong message. I was so close to giving you 6 stars, but I noticed a tiny variation in the syllable count from 7 to 9. Overall this is a great entry. Good luck and congadulations.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2016
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Thanks for these really great comments and fine review, blessings, Roy
Comment from chocoletdrop052
Well spent, a wonderful talent you have displayed. We are all molded in the form of Mankind because the LORD said: Let us make mankind in our own image. We are partly angels from above and sown in the Holy Father's love. So when we are part of the Heel of the LORD, Then we will know to listen to His voice. Who can instruct the LORD who made us in this clay form, for no one knows the Son except the Father and no knows the Father except His Only Son. Our image is just a display for the world to recognize the Father, Son and the Holy Spirit today. Amen
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2016
Well spent, a wonderful talent you have displayed. We are all molded in the form of Mankind because the LORD said: Let us make mankind in our own image. We are partly angels from above and sown in the Holy Father's love. So when we are part of the Heel of the LORD, Then we will know to listen to His voice. Who can instruct the LORD who made us in this clay form, for no one knows the Son except the Father and no knows the Father except His Only Son. Our image is just a display for the world to recognize the Father, Son and the Holy Spirit today. Amen
Comment Written 08-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2016
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Thanks so much for your beautiful words and and very wise review, blessings. Roy
Comment from TPAC
True faith conveyances touching in presented spoken state and appealing in its given concerns: a creative write with thought-provoking words said.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2016
True faith conveyances touching in presented spoken state and appealing in its given concerns: a creative write with thought-provoking words said.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2016
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Thanks for these really great comments and fine review, blessings, Roy
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a lovely poem, Roy. One of my favorite hymns is, "You Are the Potter and I Am The Clay." Puts things in perspective, too. This looks like it is/was a good entry for the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2016
This is a lovely poem, Roy. One of my favorite hymns is, "You Are the Potter and I Am The Clay." Puts things in perspective, too. This looks like it is/was a good entry for the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 04-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2016
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Thanks Marilyn for the marvellous review,
Comment from Janet Foor
Excellent message in "What is a Clay vessel" contest. He definitely is the potter and we are the clay. I particularly liked the last stanza. Well done and good luck in the contest
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2016
Excellent message in "What is a Clay vessel" contest. He definitely is the potter and we are the clay. I particularly liked the last stanza. Well done and good luck in the contest
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 02-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2016
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Thanks so much Janet, for these wonderful remarks and stars, b
Comment from lalique
The poem is thought provoking. I am not sure that I agree with everything the poem has to say. It is a reasonably brief poem that flows well.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2016
The poem is thought provoking. I am not sure that I agree with everything the poem has to say. It is a reasonably brief poem that flows well.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2016
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thanks
Comment from write hand blue
Although of religious content, this is an easy to read poem. It compares a clay pot to a supposed person's life.
Well written with a good rhyming scheme. Good luck in the competition... ~Mel~
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2016
Although of religious content, this is an easy to read poem. It compares a clay pot to a supposed person's life.
Well written with a good rhyming scheme. Good luck in the competition... ~Mel~
Comment Written 02-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2016
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Thanks so much for the great review,
Comment from Eric1
Hi Mystery Author, this is a wonderful entry for this particular competition, beautifully written words with excellent rhyme and flow and one of the best I have reviewed, I wish you the very best of luck in the contest my friend.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2016
Hi Mystery Author, this is a wonderful entry for this particular competition, beautifully written words with excellent rhyme and flow and one of the best I have reviewed, I wish you the very best of luck in the contest my friend.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2016
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Thanks Eric for this wonderful review and amazing stars,
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You are very welcome, well deserved.
Comment from writeapoem
This is an excellent entry and a nicely written poem. It flows with a rhythm. I like your inspiration coming from God's word regarding the potter over the clay. All the best
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2016
This is an excellent entry and a nicely written poem. It flows with a rhythm. I like your inspiration coming from God's word regarding the potter over the clay. All the best
Comment Written 01-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2016
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Thanks for these wonderful words and review