thoughts and feelings in poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 32 "A simple Prayer"poems reflecting my thoughts and feelings
11 total reviews
Comment from artisart4u
I am sorry to hear of this person's husband passing away. Your prayer for another was very thoughtful. Don't stop being friendly towards your neighbor.
It sounds like a sincere prayer, "a simple prayer." I sure it will be read by many
and good luck with it in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2016
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I am sorry to hear of this person's husband passing away. Your prayer for another was very thoughtful. Don't stop being friendly towards your neighbor.
It sounds like a sincere prayer, "a simple prayer." I sure it will be read by many
and good luck with it in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2016
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Sorry it took me so long to respond, I don't get to spend a lot of time on here.T hank you for your review and comment, I appreciate it.
Comment from Susanne M. Psyris
This is a very sweet and lovely prayer for your friend. A good entry to the "Write a Prayer Poem" contest. I thoroughly enjoyed the read. Good luck in the contest. God bless and hugs, Susanne
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2016
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This is a very sweet and lovely prayer for your friend. A good entry to the "Write a Prayer Poem" contest. I thoroughly enjoyed the read. Good luck in the contest. God bless and hugs, Susanne
Comment Written 04-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2016
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Thank you for your review and comment .I do appreciate it,Sorry it took me so long to respond I am not able to spend as mush time on here as I would like to.
Comment from Kaydoe
A well written sincere poem from the heart for a friend who lost her husband.
I lost my second husband, he was 47 and it is never easy at any age.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2016
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A well written sincere poem from the heart for a friend who lost her husband.
I lost my second husband, he was 47 and it is never easy at any age.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2016
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Thanks for reading and commenting I appreciate it God Bless
Comment from MSJVClarke
This is an excellent prayer. I see how compassionate and loving you speak this prayer. The strongest prayers are definitely those we pray for others, unselfishly and lovingly spoken. You chose your words carefully and blended them together perfectly to make a great prayer poem.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2016
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This is an excellent prayer. I see how compassionate and loving you speak this prayer. The strongest prayers are definitely those we pray for others, unselfishly and lovingly spoken. You chose your words carefully and blended them together perfectly to make a great prayer poem.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2016
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Thank you For taking your time to read and comment I appreciate it .Sorry it took me so long to respond I do not get to spend as mush time on here as I would like to. God Bless
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You are welcome. I don't get on line much lately myself.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Very nice, Anonymous Author. Not only did you try and lift the spirits of a fellow FanStorian and friend, you used the opportunity to enter this heartfelt prayer in a contest as well.
Now that's what I call time management.
Best of luck to you in the contest
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2016
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Very nice, Anonymous Author. Not only did you try and lift the spirits of a fellow FanStorian and friend, you used the opportunity to enter this heartfelt prayer in a contest as well.
Now that's what I call time management.
Best of luck to you in the contest
Comment Written 20-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2016
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Thanks Dean, Sorry it has taken me so long to respond, I do not get to spend as much time on here as I would like to.God Bless.
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No worries. I'm on here everyday and still I procrastinate concerning answering reviews.
You're more than welcome.
God bless.
~Dean
Comment from P1
i'm sure this is a very difficult time for her
but your beautiful prayer for is bound to
lighten her load a little. very thoughtful and
a pleasure to read and review
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2016
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i'm sure this is a very difficult time for her
but your beautiful prayer for is bound to
lighten her load a little. very thoughtful and
a pleasure to read and review
Comment Written 20-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2016
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Thank you for reading and commenting, I do appreciate it .Sorry it has taken so long for me to respond, I don't get to spend a lot of time on here.
Comment from foxangie123
This is such a most beautiful and lovely poem for sweetwoodjax. She will be very pleased I am sure. It is nice when friends pull together, pray, and write, to tribute one we write with here on FanStory or in any manner. Awesome.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2016
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This is such a most beautiful and lovely poem for sweetwoodjax. She will be very pleased I am sure. It is nice when friends pull together, pray, and write, to tribute one we write with here on FanStory or in any manner. Awesome.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2016
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Thank you for your review and comment,I Wrote this the night that sweetwoodjax posted her husband passed,I was not going to post it I was just thinking about her,Then I saw the new contest posted and decided to use it .I don"t want to win a contest through someone pain, I wish I could figure out how to take it off the contest ,
Comment from hdphifer
This is a sincere poem of the heart. With you realizing that you cannot do or say anything that might change her situation, you are requesting help from our heavenly father for comfort. You are expressing your knowledge of feeling in the lost of your father which you know was only helped by God's intervention.
Thank you for sharing and praying for Sweetwoodjax.
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reply by the author on 17-Jun-2016
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This is a sincere poem of the heart. With you realizing that you cannot do or say anything that might change her situation, you are requesting help from our heavenly father for comfort. You are expressing your knowledge of feeling in the lost of your father which you know was only helped by God's intervention.
Thank you for sharing and praying for Sweetwoodjax.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2016
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Thank you for reviewing,I appreciate it,
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
Amen - a very well-written poem prayer. We feel sad with Sweetwoodjax. I agree only God can give her comfort and I pray with you that He will.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2016
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Amen - a very well-written poem prayer. We feel sad with Sweetwoodjax. I agree only God can give her comfort and I pray with you that He will.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2016
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Thank you,God Bless
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi
= This is a very nice prayer going out to Sweetwoodjax.
= I know it will touch her. She appreciates all the great support.
= Nice entry for the contest. Good luck.
(*>*) A Smile Is A Frown Turned Upside-down (*>*)
Cheers & Blessings ~ Jacqueline ~ Jackie ~ Jax
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2016
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Hi
= This is a very nice prayer going out to Sweetwoodjax.
= I know it will touch her. She appreciates all the great support.
= Nice entry for the contest. Good luck.
(*>*) A Smile Is A Frown Turned Upside-down (*>*)
Cheers & Blessings ~ Jacqueline ~ Jackie ~ Jax
Comment Written 14-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2016
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Thank you for reviewing,I appreciate it.Keep smiling God Bless